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10. marts 2013 af dengale205 (Slettet) - Niveau: 10. klasse

We are in New York, a police officer is on his way to work when he meets up he gets a shocking news that he had not anticipated. it is the drug dog which is dead and Eddie is in shock he can't comprehend it. He was unable to go with it yesterday and now the plus away but it is not just something to do when the boss tells that there is immediately a new dog and Eddie and his companion goes immediately to the task. They are looking for a good dog, and Eddie, for they shall start their search. They start in Brooklyn it is Eddie's hometown they see a white dog who sleeps on the street Eddie goes immediately to the dog he tries to awaken it but it is already awake dog looks very unwell and he tag it with to the police station. He shows the dog to his boss and the boss says "you have three weeks to learn the dog to know better" and Eddie understood the message he should allow the dog to a real police dog. He was he would start giving the dog a name and he knew what it was to be called. It was to be called Murphy it was a good dog name, Murphy was only four years old but now the hard work begins. It should first of all out and run it was good for the Eddie was impressed with the dog it was a real fighther. Eddie continued to train the dog so that it could become a police dog. Now, they had only a week back and Eddie is looking to get Murphy ready for rehearsal, but there was a small problem Murphy was ill and could not work out in three days. It is so bad next to Eddie, but Murphy recovered after two days and it was good he could now prepare it to rehearsal which was a couple of days.

Murphy did rehearsal and was now officially a police dog, and Eddie was proud he could not comprehend it for some weeks ago, it was a street dog and now it is a police dog time flies and he was so proud of Murphy that he was crying. Eddie was so pleased that he took the dog home with them and knew it to his family they were proud of the dog and Eddie s work. Eddie was older and he would soon retire, and he was sorry he was to soon to say farewell to his friend's and dog Murphy. Eddie would had worked as a police officer for 14 years and it was many years Eddie was able to his work now was approaching the time to which he should say goodbye to the other but a small problem has arisen There is fire in a school in Brooklyn and who becomes Eddie Murphy called out to Murphy and has a task and that is to determine how the fire was Murphy quickly finds out he succeed how the fire was and Murphy was a dog completely he received a medal from the Mayor all in New York knew him there was made a movie about him he was known all knew who he was. Eddie should now retire and it was all sad especially the Manager he had worked with Eddie in 14 years and now he should take leave of one of his best officers. and that he was sorry, but after they had said goodbye to Eddie, Eddie had just think to say to open a training center where you could get with his dogs and train them. It was a success there was so many people with their dogs that they had to wait outside for long drivers Eddie opened a store in Manhattan. He was one of New York's wealthiest people and it was good for 28 years ago, he had again money now poured that money into.

Eddie missing Murphy so much he went to the police station to see how Murphy had it was really old they could Murphy. not use the longer as Eddie asked if he could take care of Murphy and he had like he took Murphy to one of its training centre and just after two hours came that very many people Murphy was an icon for the fitness center. There were people from other countries which would have Murphy to come and advertise their clothes and it was wonderful. Murphy was now the world's known there were very many people who would buy Murphy but Eddie was against it all the time, "Murphy said he is not for sale" it was well said Eddie would never ever sell Murphy but he told reporters "I sell only Murphy show it is necessary" and all was surprised it thought it was not him who said a few days ago, he is not for sale. There came allemulige estimate of Murphy the most surprising was that Mike tyson would buy the dog and it was big think Eddie he would like to sell Murphy for a large sum of money. Mike tyson 41 million offered for Murphy but Eddie would like to have 80 million and Mike tyson could only offer 74 million, but in the end, said Eddie Yes to the offer and sold Murphy for 74 million it was the most we could sell a dog too and Mike tyson became the new owners of Murphy he was proud of the he said one he would keep it until he dies. Mike tyson had a dog in the already named Sandy and Murphy had children with Sandy they had two dogs along a girl and a boy now had Murphy a real dog family. Mike tyson was very proud of his dog now had hand four dogs was made a movie about them and mike tyson was proud of his dogs Especially Murphy he children had wanted with Murphy was playing the whole time with him.  It is a happy ending to Murphy's story a dog who had lived on the streets and slept on the way but was now owned by one of verdenst best boxers.


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10. marts 2013 af dengale205 (Slettet)

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13. marts 2013 af Phthalaten (Slettet)

Hej dengale205.

I tilfælde af, at du læser dette, ville jeg lige informere dig om at den rettede aflevering jeg sendte til dig er fyldt med fejl. Jeg regnede med at du ville snyde mig, hvilket også er grunden til at jeg sendte en "rettet" aflevering, hvori jeg med vilje havde lavet masser af fejl. I tilfælde af, at du gerne vil have den rigtige rettede aflevering, må du kontakte mig herinde igen.

Hilsen Simon/Phthalaten

Ps. Google translate og venlige mennesker kan ikke redde dine afleveringer hver gang.


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