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oversættelse HJÆLP INDEN FREDAG

02. november 2005 af MissBih (Slettet)
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De kommer 10 min efter, at timen er begyndt. De har ikke lavet lektie,har glemt bøgerne derhjemme, forstyrrer undervisningen ved at tale højt med sidemanden, går ud og ind af klassen, som det passer dem, og går deres vej 20 min, før timen er slut, så de kan nå bussen. Sådan beskriver mange gymnasielærere nutidens elever. Lærerne har med bekymring været vidne til, at et stigende antal elever opfører sig fuldstændigt, som de har lyst til, og nægter at tage noget ansvar for, at der kommer noget fornuftigt ud af undervisningen. Men hvad er mon årsagen? Er gymnasiet blevet for kedeligt, eller er eleverne simpelthen for forkælede? Har internettet og videospil ødelagt unges evne til at koncentrere sig?
Der er mange spørgsmål og kun få svar, men et er sikkert: de unge er ikke blevet dummere og de formes fortsat af den kultur, de er vokset op i.

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They arrive ten minutes after the lesson has begun. They haven’t done their homework, they have forgot their books at home, they disturb the teaching by talking loud with the person sitting next to them, they go in and out the classroom as they pleas, and they leave the lesson 20 minutes before so they can catch the bus.
This is how many gymnasium teachers describe the students of today. The teachers have with worry, witnessed that a rising number of students behave completely as they want, and refuse to take any responsibility for there to come something sensible by the teaching.
But what could be the reason? Is gymnasium gotten to boring, or are the students simply to spoiled? Has the Internet and videogames ruined the young ones ability to concentrate?
There are many questions and only a few answers, but one is certain: The young ones ( er ikke blevet dummere) and they are still formed with the culture they grew up in.















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Svar #1
02. november 2005 af MacMadsen (Slettet)

gymnasium = high school (gymnasium på engelsk betyder gymnastiksal)

husk at læse i gennem for nogle stavefejl. Tror bare det er trykfejl der er smuttet.

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02. november 2005 af ninnacaroline (Slettet)

They arrive ten minutes after the lesson has begun. They haven’t done their homework, they have forgot their books at home, they disturb the teaching by talking loud with the person sitting next to them, they go in and out the classroom as they please, and they leave the lesson 20 minutes before to catch the bus.
This is how many High School teachers describe the students of today. The teachers have with worry, witnessed that an increasing number of students behave completely as they want, and refuse to take any responsibility to get something sensible out of the teaching.
But what could be the reason? Ha High School become too boring, or are the students simply too spoiled? Has the Internet and videogames ruined the youngs ability to concentrate?
There are many questions and only a few answers, but one is certain: The youngs hasn't becomed more stupied and they are still shaped by the culture they grew up in.

Lige et par enkelte rettelser :)

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02. november 2005 af Mac3 (Slettet)

They arrive ten minutes after the lesson has begun. They haven’t done their homework, they have (forgot) FORGOTTEN their books at home, they (disturb the teaching) DISRUPT THE CLASSES by talking (loud) LOUDLY with the person sitting next to them, they go in and out the classroom as they (pleas) PLEASE, and they leave the (lesson) CLASS 20 minutes before TIME so they can catch the bus.
This is how many (gymnasium) teachers IN UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOLS describe the students of today. The teachers have with (worry)CONCERN, witnessed that (a rising) AN INCREASING number of students behave completely as they want, and refuse to take any responsibility for (there to come something sensible by the teaching) A SENSIBLE OUTCOME OF THE LESSONS.
But what could be the reason? (Is) HAS (gymnasium) UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL (gotten) BECOME (to)TOO boring, or are the students simply (to) TOO spoiled? Has the Internet and videogames ruined the (young ones) YOUNGSTERS' ability to concentrate?
There are many questions and only (a) few answers, but one THING is certain: The young (ones)HAVE NOT BECOM MORE STUPID ( er ikke blevet dummere) and they are still (formed with) SHAPED BY the culture they grew up in.

Svar #4
03. november 2005 af MissBih (Slettet)

tusind tak til jer begge. :)

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Svar #5
05. november 2005 af pokemon (Slettet)

Lav være med at skrive med sammentrækninger (they haven't), når du kan skrive det rigtige: they have not. Har fået tærsket ind gennem folkeren og gymnasiet at der er stor forskel på skrift og talesprog og at man bør holde denne forskel hellig. Bare et råd!

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Svar #6
06. november 2005 af Mac3 (Slettet)

Forskellen ligger ikke så meget i skrift og talesprog som i formel og uformel kommunikation.
Uformelt sprog kan sagtens forekomme på skrift, f.eks i aviser og ugeblade. Sammenlign den engelske Prime Minister's hjemmeside med The Sun eller anden avis. Statsministerens hjemmeside er formel, altså uden sammentrækninger, mens aviserne ofte benytter sammentrækninger.
Teksten i denne tråd er ikke en man ville finde på ministerens side, men snarere i en avis.

Det er sådan virkeligheden ser ud, men desværre ser det ofte anderledes ud i klasselokalerne, især hvis lærerne ikke følger godt med i udviklingen af undervisningsteorier. Det lader det til, at de ikke gør, ud fra denne sort/hvide skelnen mellem formelt og uformelt sprog og mængden af de oversættelser, der bliver lavet.
Det er IKKE det, der nutildags bliver betragtet som fornuftig engelskundervisning.

Jeg vil anbefale, at når I næste gang skal oversætte en tekst, der er/kunne være en avisartikel, så print en ægte artikel ud (med sammentrækninger) og vedlæg den. Insister på at lære engelsk som englændere bruger det, og ikke engelsk som danskere bruger det.

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