Hvordan skriver man abstract til SRO i gymnasiet

Hej, jeg har allerede skrevet et udkast, men er stadig meget itvivl om hvordan det skal skrives.

Udkast:

This paper examines the issues of migration between Africa and France, including push- and pull-factors. Based on the requested literature, there will be an analysis and interpretation of the problems that Africans face, especially regarding the dream, and the realization of the dream. In the analysis I have chosen a more psychological approach. Finally the paper concludes with a discussion of the importance of immigration, and a valuation of immigrants' importance, furthermore an explanation of the status in those countries today. The discussion highlights the 2006/2007 French Immigration and Integration Law concerning the immigrants and their integration in France, the so-called “Selective immigration” that Nicolas Sarkozy has been an important contribution.
My approach to the different taxonomic levels has been mostly economically corrected.