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A Postcard from New York

Dear mum and dad,

Now I’m in New York also called the Big Apple. It’s extremely beautiful, and the people here are so nice.
  Today I went shopping in Times Square. It was fantastic, and there were so many colourful neon lights. I actually bought both of you a souvenir, but you will have to wait, because I want it to be a surprise.
  Yesterday I went to the world-famous Statue of Liberty. It was amazing and the view from the harbour was so beautiful. Did you know, that the Statue of Liberty was given as a gift to the USA from France in 1886, and the figure of the woman was designed by Frédéric-Auguste Bartholdi.
  Tomorrow I have planned to see the Empire State Building. I’m so excited to see the 381 m tall building. I’ve got to go to sleep now, see you back in Denmark.

Yours Sarmad

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