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03. marts 2014 af 1256m (Slettet) - Niveau: 7. klasse

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The Samsara

                                                            

The Film ”samsara” is, a documentary, directed by, Ron Fricke. The film show us how or food is produced. The show us how badly the animals get treated, that the food industry is getting bigger, and the bigger they get the more fat people are getting. All, the meat, that is baught in a supermarket, is result of an industrialized process that, has nothing to do with green field.

Watching this clip can almost make everyone considering going vegan. I think that it’s the circle of life, and that i don’t feel bad for the animals, getting killed. But i think there are a right and a wrong way. And it’s is in our nature, but i think the way, the kill the animals, are so cruel. And I know we eat meat but the way people treat animals is not normal. And i do eat chicken and cow, but not becouse I think it’s a pleasure, just because it is in our nature it’s in our food chain. But that’s not the point, the point is, how they animals get treated. I like it better the way our ancestor’s did it. They didn’t buy there meat in packets, they killed the animals themselve and times change, and we don’t always have to follow the way our assenters used to live. But I think we should treat the animals in a better way, even, do, we are going to kill them later.

In the clip, we see how the cows, are housed and milked inside a milk factory. While the show us in the bottle a images of cows happily in fields. And pigs being placed in small cages that does not allow them to, move, while they kids are being nursing, and then there are on the way to processing.

Everything seeing in the clip is like a robot industrial process. We even see the person who is working in the factories, look like robot. We don't see any signs of farms, grass or dirt. Later we see people in the supermarket, grabbing tons of packages of meat, milk and processed foods. Then we see a woman and two men, at a fast food restaurant, eating like beasts. In the last scene we see an obese person’s belly, being marked. I think, this scene, make everybody want to throw up.

But I don’t think the fast-food industry is the biggest problem I think it’s the human who start the problem. Because the fast-food industry is just a part of our life but still the can have an influence.

And going vegetarian is not going to make a change. And it’s also bad for your health, so the only change that is going, to happen is in your own life. 


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Svar #1
03. marts 2014 af yasminadem (Slettet)

The Samsara

                                                            

The Film ”samsara” is, a documentary, directed by Ron Fricke. The film show(s) us how or (our) food is produced. The(y) show us how badly the animals get (are) treated. They also show us that the food industry is getting bigger and the bigger they get the fatter people are getting. All the meat that is bought in a supermarket, is result of an industrialized process that has nothing to do with green fields.

Watching this clip can almost make everyone considering going vegan. I think that it’s the circle of life, and I don’t feel bad for the animals getting killed. But i think there´s a right and a wrong way. It’s is in our nature, but i think the way the(y) kill the animals are so cruel. And I know we eat meat but the way people treat (the) animals is not normal. I do eat chicken and beef (oksekød) but it's not bec(a)use I think it’s a pleasure, it's just because it is in our nature and in our food chain. But that’s not the point, the point is how the animals are treated. I like the way our ancestor’s did it. They didn’t buy their meat in packets, they killed the animals themselves, but time changes and we don’t always have to follow the way our assenters used to live. But I think we should treat the animals in a better way, even though we are going to kill them later.

In the clip, we see how the cows, are housed and milked inside a milk factory. While they on the milk cartons show us an image of a cow,  who live happily in the fields. And pigs are being placed in small cages that doesn't allow them to move, while their kids are being nursing, and then they are on their way to processing.

Everything in the clips is like a robot industrial process. We even see the persons, who is working in the factories looks like robots. We don't see any signs of farms, grass or dirt. Later we see people in the supermarket, grabbing tons of packages of meat, milk and processed foods. Then we see a woman and two men at a fast food restaurant, eating like beasts. In the last scene we see an obese person’s belly being marked. I think this scene makes me wanting to throw up.

But I don’t think the fast-food industry is the biggest problem. I think it’s the human who starts the problem. Because the fast-food industry is just a part of our life but it still can have an influence.

Going vegetarian is not going to make a change. It’s also bad for your health, so the only change that is going to happen, is in your own life.


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03. marts 2014 af yasminadem (Slettet)

Har markeret nogle af fejlene, men så også skrevet rettelsen ;) bare så du lige ved hvilke fejl det er du laver.

Men håber det hjalp :D


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