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04. december 2005 af
shortyboo (Slettet)
er der ikke lige en der vil kigge min stil igennem??
jeg har skrevet den her, og det er ikke nogen god opgave, men bare en lille stil på 300 ord ;)
men here goes:
My third year assignment.
In my third year assignment I shall write in Italian. Some of the topic’s are about children who are grown up in a family who have not given them love and the necessary manners in their childhood. They are left to themselves and can not behave normally. The writer’s name is Simona Vinci, and she has a very special writing style. She is a very popular writer in Italy and rest of Europe. The novel is about six children who comes for six different families and they play together. But suddenly their innocent games becomes totally brutal and completely repulsive. The children play in a barn and the oldest who is only 13 years old bring a play boy magazine along. First the were timid but the oldest boy obtained the other children to play some of the games that they saw in the magazines. It is a horrible novel but the writer has such a special writing style that you just can not let go of it. It is the same with the book we read in our English classes “Disgrace”. Simona Vinci draw parallels to other popular writhers like the writer in “Disgrace” do. Simona Vinci writes about the problematic that occurs in Italy right now. Some of the problems are that the parents do not take care of their children and do not give them a right upbringing so therefore the children can not distinguish between right and wrong. But in the beginning she makes it clear to the readers that her childhood has not been like the children she write about. On the first page she write: “to my mother who always was there for me”.
I can not wait to get my assignment because I am well prepared and therefore very excited about how it will be.
jeg har skrevet den her, og det er ikke nogen god opgave, men bare en lille stil på 300 ord ;)
men here goes:
My third year assignment.
In my third year assignment I shall write in Italian. Some of the topic’s are about children who are grown up in a family who have not given them love and the necessary manners in their childhood. They are left to themselves and can not behave normally. The writer’s name is Simona Vinci, and she has a very special writing style. She is a very popular writer in Italy and rest of Europe. The novel is about six children who comes for six different families and they play together. But suddenly their innocent games becomes totally brutal and completely repulsive. The children play in a barn and the oldest who is only 13 years old bring a play boy magazine along. First the were timid but the oldest boy obtained the other children to play some of the games that they saw in the magazines. It is a horrible novel but the writer has such a special writing style that you just can not let go of it. It is the same with the book we read in our English classes “Disgrace”. Simona Vinci draw parallels to other popular writhers like the writer in “Disgrace” do. Simona Vinci writes about the problematic that occurs in Italy right now. Some of the problems are that the parents do not take care of their children and do not give them a right upbringing so therefore the children can not distinguish between right and wrong. But in the beginning she makes it clear to the readers that her childhood has not been like the children she write about. On the first page she write: “to my mother who always was there for me”.
I can not wait to get my assignment because I am well prepared and therefore very excited about how it will be.
Svar #1
04. december 2005 af Ralphi (Slettet)
Her er rettet noget af det!
HÅber du kan bruge det.
My third year assignment.
I SHALL WRITE MY THIRD YEAR ASSIGNMENT IN ITALIEN. Some of the topic’s (UDEN ´ - TOPICS) are about children who are grown up in a family who have not given them love and the necessary manners in their childhood. They are left to themselves and can not (CANNOT eller CAN’T) behave normally (JEG VILLE NOK BRUGE BEHAVE IN AN ORDINARY WAY). The writer’s name is Simona Vinci (THE NAME OF THE WRITER IS), and she has a very special writing style (STYLE OF WRITING). She is a very popular writer (AUTHOR – bare for at bruge et andet ord) in Italy and (THE) rest of Europe. The novel is about six children who comes (COME- GRUNDLED ER FLERTAL) for (FROM) six different families and they play together. But suddenly their innocent games becomes (BECOME UDEN S) totally brutal and completely repulsive. The children play in a barn and the oldest who is only 13 years old bring a play boy (PLAYBOY I 1 ORD) magazine along. First the (THEY) were timid but the oldest boy obtained the other children (OTHERS OG SLET CHILDREN) to play some of the games that they saw in the magazines (MAGAZINE UDEN S HVIS DET ALTSÅ KUN VAR 1 BLAD). It is (SUCH) a horrible novel but the writer has such (SLET SUCH) a (VERY) special writing style (WAY OF WRITING) that you just can not (CANNOT) let go of it. It is the same with the book we read in our English classes “Disgrace”. Simona Vinci draw parallels to other popular writhers (WRITERS) like the writer in “Disgrace” do (DOES). Simona Vinci writes about the problematic (PROBLEM) that occurs in Italy right now. Some of the problems are that the parents do not take care of their children and do not give them a right upbringing so therefore the children can not (CANNOT) distinguish between right and wrong. But in the beginning she makes it clear to the readers that her childhood has not been like the children she write (WRITES) about. On the first page she write (WRITES eller ON THE FIRST PAGE THERE’S WRITTEN): “(T STORT BOGSTAV)to my mother who always was there for me”.
I can not (CANNOT) wait to get my assignment because I am well prepared and therefore very excited about how it will be.
HÅber du kan bruge det.
My third year assignment.
I SHALL WRITE MY THIRD YEAR ASSIGNMENT IN ITALIEN. Some of the topic’s (UDEN ´ - TOPICS) are about children who are grown up in a family who have not given them love and the necessary manners in their childhood. They are left to themselves and can not (CANNOT eller CAN’T) behave normally (JEG VILLE NOK BRUGE BEHAVE IN AN ORDINARY WAY). The writer’s name is Simona Vinci (THE NAME OF THE WRITER IS), and she has a very special writing style (STYLE OF WRITING). She is a very popular writer (AUTHOR – bare for at bruge et andet ord) in Italy and (THE) rest of Europe. The novel is about six children who comes (COME- GRUNDLED ER FLERTAL) for (FROM) six different families and they play together. But suddenly their innocent games becomes (BECOME UDEN S) totally brutal and completely repulsive. The children play in a barn and the oldest who is only 13 years old bring a play boy (PLAYBOY I 1 ORD) magazine along. First the (THEY) were timid but the oldest boy obtained the other children (OTHERS OG SLET CHILDREN) to play some of the games that they saw in the magazines (MAGAZINE UDEN S HVIS DET ALTSÅ KUN VAR 1 BLAD). It is (SUCH) a horrible novel but the writer has such (SLET SUCH) a (VERY) special writing style (WAY OF WRITING) that you just can not (CANNOT) let go of it. It is the same with the book we read in our English classes “Disgrace”. Simona Vinci draw parallels to other popular writhers (WRITERS) like the writer in “Disgrace” do (DOES). Simona Vinci writes about the problematic (PROBLEM) that occurs in Italy right now. Some of the problems are that the parents do not take care of their children and do not give them a right upbringing so therefore the children can not (CANNOT) distinguish between right and wrong. But in the beginning she makes it clear to the readers that her childhood has not been like the children she write (WRITES) about. On the first page she write (WRITES eller ON THE FIRST PAGE THERE’S WRITTEN): “(T STORT BOGSTAV)to my mother who always was there for me”.
I can not (CANNOT) wait to get my assignment because I am well prepared and therefore very excited about how it will be.
Svar #3
04. december 2005 af shortyboo (Slettet)
det er godt nok rart at du gad og rette, for de fleste af fejlene ved jeg jo godt, men man overser altid sine egne fejl, det er pisse irriterende!
men husk: jeg værdsætter virkelig din hjælp, for det er åndssvagt og få fejl for noget man egentlig godt ved.. især den med "cannot".. ja ja, det er jo søndag aften ;)
men skriv til mig hvis du kan bruge min hjælp til noget en gang.
de bedste julehilsner fra Shorty ;o)
men husk: jeg værdsætter virkelig din hjælp, for det er åndssvagt og få fejl for noget man egentlig godt ved.. især den med "cannot".. ja ja, det er jo søndag aften ;)
men skriv til mig hvis du kan bruge min hjælp til noget en gang.
de bedste julehilsner fra Shorty ;o)
Svar #4
04. december 2005 af Ralphi (Slettet)
Det var da så lidt!!!! hehe, er glad for du ku bruge det...
hmm er du god til fransk?
hmm er du god til fransk?
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