Engelsk Essay Opgave

Du skal vist bare ligge den ind :)

:) folk giver normalt op, når der er tale om 1-1½ normalsides engelsk.

Er der nogle, der er på engelsk a/b niveau, som klarer sig godt, og som gider at kigge på min opgave?

Jeg regner med at sende den til vedkommende, i morgen tidlig :) 9:00, så hvis du kan der, ville det være perfekt

Dave Grohl

Selvom du måske ikke tror det , er mit engelsk niveau faktisk ret højt, så du skal være velkommen til at sende den til mig, hvis du vil :)

Må sige at der er flot, hvis en pige i 8.klasse er så højt oppe :), men du kan jo være fra England eller boet i et engelsk talende land osv... så jeg giver dig "the benefit of the doubt"

Der kommer en opgave i morgen tidlig/formiddag :)

Du kan også lige den herind, så skal jeg eller andre nok kigge på den. Måske ikke i en omgang, men så over flere, når du jo nu siger den er rimelig lang.

MVH
Fingersen

#5

Det er helt fint, så ligger jeg den herind :)

Mvh Dave Grohl

Jeg starter ud med den quotation, jeg har skrevet ud fra. Det er bare det grammatiske der skal tjekkes :)

”I am not aware of any food that could help your hair or skin look better and I don’t see how that is possible. People need to eat balanced diets with enough vitamins and nutrients to look well. This sounds like a marketing play.”

This quotation by Dr Wendy Doyle certainly holds a lot of truth to it. Generally people simply need to keep a healthy balanced diet, in order to look well. Although that is the opinion of some dietary experts, L’oreal and Nestlé have a different take on things.

There is a new ongoing development in the processed foods area. This development, led by the gigantic processed foods manufacturer Nestlé, has received a lot of attention and criticism from dietary experts. They believe this new idea is nothing but a mere marketing gimmick. Nestlé and the cosmetics company L’Oreal have launched “Laboratoires Inneov”, which is to develop the world’s first range of cosmetic foods. The companies claim that these new innovative products will improve a range of physical features such as hair, skin eyes and nails.

I agree with Dr Wendy Doyle’s take on this issue. How can one not agree with several dietary experts, when it seems Nestlé and L’Oreal are/is not on solid turf. They just want one thing, money. Here in the new millennium people are like never before insecure about their looks. The media portrays this image of the perfect body, and especially teenagers have suffered from this. It has become quite common for girls to go anorexic. Just in my old primary school 2 girls suffered from anorexia. Basically the generation has become obsessed with how they look because of the media. But that is not the point. The point is that the producers try to take advantage of this situation, and make some money. They try to create a need which is not there. I think we all know, that we can get the vitamins and nutrients from non processed foods to be able to look good, but when teenagers see commercials with people they adore, they will fall for this gimmick.

In the case of Geoffrey Skurray though, I have a different take on things. In this case people can benefit in terms of health, by drinking a certain amount of the special made wine. There is nothing wrong with that at all. People, especially the elderly, can benefit from this.
Basically I believe that these new processed food products are gimmicks made up by pathetic companies, who are more focused on the overturn than the satisfaction of the customer. Fair enough, we live in a free world where one can do as one pleases, but to claim that you need special food(s?) in order to look great, is just plain stupid. I am yet to be convinced that the cosmetic foods can work wonders. I think there is huge difference if we compare Geoffrey Skurray, who sells wine with more antioxidants, and the Nestlé/L’oreal cooperation. The latter is trying to manipulate people to buy products they do not need at all, and the first is selling products people can benefit from medically

Meget flot skrevet tbh(:P). Jeg har dog fundet noget der ikke helt lyder korrekt i mine ører.

"It has become quite common for girls to go anorexic"

Jeg tror du mener noget i retning af, at mange unger pige i nutidens verden rammes af anoreksi, grundet inflydelse
fra mange ting. Jeg læser det som om at dette er noget de selv ønsker.

"It has become quite common for girls to suffer from anorexia"

Meningen kan vel nok misforståes og jeg skrev bare hvad der faldte mig ind, men samtidig hvad der for mig, gav mening.

"Just in my old primary school 2 girls suffered from anorexia. Basically the generation has become obsessed with how they look because of the media."

"Basically the generation has become obsessed with their appearence because of the media."

Begge sætninger er naturligvis rigtig.
Min var bare en anden måde at formulere sig på.

Nestlé and L’Oreal are/is > are

go anorexic > become anorecsic

special food(s?) > begge virker fint, det kommer blot an på, om du vil sige speciel mad eller specielle madvarer. Forskellen er hårfin.

manipulate people to buy > manipulate people into buying

Det er en meget fin tekst, men du virker en kende uformel, synes jeg. Denne type tekst bør have en lidt mere formel tone.

#4 - Heh, jeg har boet i england :)

"such as hair, skin eyes and nails."
such as hair, skin, eyes, and nails.