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Hjælp til rettelse af ½ side
26. januar 2006 af
Sinz (Slettet)
I went home with a lot of thoughts in my mind. I could not believe that the man who just tried flirting with me really is my dad. I was so frustrated and unable to think clear, so I decided to go home to find out what I wanted to do about this. I thought a lot about writing him a letter which maybe could clarify with telling him what I wanted of him and what I could give him. An old new boyfriend was not what I wanted, I had two options: I could choose to push him away or I could give him a chance where he could be my father but also a grandfather to Donna. The last option could be a double prize for both of us and that was really what I wanted most of him. To have a daddy and a grown friend would be so great; I have missed him for so many years, I thought to myself. Then I began to see the circumstances from point of view, I started thinking about he maybe does not wants to be a dad, maybe he leaved us because of me. I decided not to think in these lines because I knew it just would make me more nervous regarding given it to him. The month passed and now I felt ready to face the truth because the chance was worth it.
One day my phone rang which made me worried inside because of a refusal. He said I could meet him outside the “Late Night Coffee Shop” so that was the appointment. He definitely thought we should have a “romantic” trip to the pier and I was hoping for the best, but my insecurity made me nervous.
Ville gerne have ændret lidt på sproget, rettet mine fejl og evt. hvad der er gjort forket - men kan jeg jo ellers bare se.
Håber i vil hjælpe/gøre det.
One day my phone rang which made me worried inside because of a refusal. He said I could meet him outside the “Late Night Coffee Shop” so that was the appointment. He definitely thought we should have a “romantic” trip to the pier and I was hoping for the best, but my insecurity made me nervous.
Ville gerne have ændret lidt på sproget, rettet mine fejl og evt. hvad der er gjort forket - men kan jeg jo ellers bare se.
Håber i vil hjælpe/gøre det.
Svar #1
02. februar 2006 af Ralphi (Slettet)
Hej, jeg har bare lige hurtigt skimmet den igennem, så den er ikke helt fejlfri. Håber du ka bruge det alligevel.
On my way home I had a lot on my mind. I could not believe that the man, who just tried flirting with me really was my dad. I was so frustrated and unable to think clearly, so I decided to go home to find out what I wanted to do about this. I thought a lot about writing him a letter which maybe could clarify with telling him what I wanted of him and what I could give him. I didn't really want an old man to be my boyfriend and especially not my dad, so that left me with two options: I could choose to push him away or I could give him a chance where he could be my father but also a grandfather to Donna. The last option could be a double prize for both of us and that was really what I wanted most of him. To have a daddy and a grown friend would be so great; I have missed him for so many years, I thought. Then I began to see the circumstances from another point of view. I started thinking about he maybe didn't want to be a dad, maybe he left us because of me. I decided not to think in those terms because I knew it would make me more nervous regarding given it to him. The month passed and now I felt ready to face the truth because the chance was worth it.
One day my phone rang which made me worried inside because of a refusal. We decidede to meet outside at the “Late Night Coffee Shop”. He definitely thought we could have a “romantic” trip to the pier and I was hoping for the best, but my insecurity made me nervous.
On my way home I had a lot on my mind. I could not believe that the man, who just tried flirting with me really was my dad. I was so frustrated and unable to think clearly, so I decided to go home to find out what I wanted to do about this. I thought a lot about writing him a letter which maybe could clarify with telling him what I wanted of him and what I could give him. I didn't really want an old man to be my boyfriend and especially not my dad, so that left me with two options: I could choose to push him away or I could give him a chance where he could be my father but also a grandfather to Donna. The last option could be a double prize for both of us and that was really what I wanted most of him. To have a daddy and a grown friend would be so great; I have missed him for so many years, I thought. Then I began to see the circumstances from another point of view. I started thinking about he maybe didn't want to be a dad, maybe he left us because of me. I decided not to think in those terms because I knew it would make me more nervous regarding given it to him. The month passed and now I felt ready to face the truth because the chance was worth it.
One day my phone rang which made me worried inside because of a refusal. We decidede to meet outside at the “Late Night Coffee Shop”. He definitely thought we could have a “romantic” trip to the pier and I was hoping for the best, but my insecurity made me nervous.
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