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02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

hey.. er der nogen der vil læse min stil igennem, nu synes jeg ligesom at jeg ikke kan komme videre! kan ikke finde flere fejl, men ved at der sikkert er flere..

den er ikke så lang, så hvis der er en der har tid kan de bare kigge den igennem.. her kommer den.. (det er bare et summary)

The main character is a woman who is a journalist, she has a husband two children and some pets. She was in her office thinking of, to log on a website to see if somebody interesting had logged on. She imagined what the people’s employment were now. On the websidte she saw a name which surprised her, videlicet Jed Cunningham. She was surprised because Jed was her old school-boyfriend, and she knew that he was not the kind of person who looked back on the past. She thought of the time when they were in love, they were just 17 years old. Their love was very passionat, but they did not sleep with each other.
They was very different, especially him, from others at their age. They talked to each other in codes, and lokked at each other so nobody could read they facial expression. They lived in an other world, but it was good for them.
They had many dreams and expectations for their future, but when she came to think of what their plans for the future were, then she remembered why he left her. He wanted, as a 18 years old boy, leav his parents in favour of leaving to Ireland and work as a poet. She thought it was preposterous because they were young and furthermore that her parents had their expectations of her going to university and getting a career at becomming successful.
All of a sudden she sees that she has four emails in her inbox, and one of them was from Jed. They wrote a bit together, but at one time she has had enough of him and deleted his emails.

på forhpnd tak for hjælpen!

//Shorty

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Svar #1
02. marts 2006 af Luli (Slettet)

Website og Leave..
Det var de 2 stave fejl, jeg fandt.. men nu er jeg heller ikke verdens bedste ^^

Gl

Svar #2
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

hovsa, whvordan er det lige jeg har stavet til website.. hehe.. men jeg kan ikke finde den anden, hvor står det cirke??

ellers tak! :o)

//Shorty

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Svar #3
02. marts 2006 af Luli (Slettet)

a 18 years old boy, leav his parents in favour of leaving to Ireland and work as a poet.

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Svar #4
02. marts 2006 af Luli (Slettet)

Tænkte på om du ikk kunen hjælpe mig med min

Jeg har et projekt om overtro.. og min lære sagde at jeg skulle finde nogle sammenligner og modsætninger i forhold til kirken.. altså Kirken kontra overtro,

Er der ikke en/nogle som har nogle eksempler ? han slet ikk finde noget :(

Svar #5
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

tak! jeg har skrevet på dit eget indlæg ;)

//Shorty

Svar #6
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

slet ikke andre der vil kigge den igennem??

//shorty :)

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Svar #7
02. marts 2006 af jammal (Slettet)

Jeg har hurtigt scannet den igennem..og opdagede følgende:

-Prøv at omfomulere dette: "She was in her office thinking of, to log on a website to see if somebody interesting had logged on"..Jeg forslår" She was in her office considering logging on a website"

- passionat -----> husk "e" til sidst

- "They was very different"----> they were..

- "so nobody could read they facial" ----> So nobody could read their facial ..."

det var ellers dem, som jeg så hurtigt!

Svar #8
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

tusind tak.. jeg prøver lige selv at læse en gng til ;) men tusind tak, du er en skatter!

//Shorty

Svar #9
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

forresten, ved det sidste, mener du da at jeg skal sætte punktum?? (so nobody.....) for jeg kan ikke se forskellen fra min til din ;)

//Shorty

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Svar #10
02. marts 2006 af line1209 (Slettet)

The main character is a woman KOMMA who is a journalist PUNKTUM. She has a husband KOMMA two children and some pets. ONE DAY She was in her office considering logging on a website KOMMA to see if someone interesting was online (istedet for at bruge udtrykket: logged on the internet, kan man bruge: being online). One the Website, KOMMA she saw a name KOMMA which surprised her, videlicet? (jeg er ikke sikker på hvad du mener her) Jed Cummingham. She was suprised KOMMA Jed vas her old HIGH School boyfriend, and she knew that he was not the kind of person KOMMA who looked back AT the past. She thought of the time when they were in love, they were just 17 years old. Their love was very passionatE, but they did not sleep TOGETHER . They WERE very different, especially him, from others at their age. They talked to each other in codes (slet komma) and LOOKED at each other, omformuler: so nobody could reach their facial expression. They lived in another (husk at another er i et ord) world, but it was good for them.
They had many dreams and expectations for the future, but AS she REMEMBERED their plans for the future, she remembered why he left her. WHEN HE WAS 18 YEARS OLD, HE WANTED TO LEAVE HIS PARENTS, AND GO TO IRELAND TO WORK AS POET. She though that it was preposterous, KOMMA because they were young and furthermore KOMMA (slet that) her parents had (slet their) expectations of her going to A university KOMMA (slet and) getting a career AND (slet at) BECOMING successful.
All of a sudden KOMMA she sees that she has four emails in her inbox (slet komma) and one of them IS (du skriver jo i nutid nu). They wrote a bit together, but at one time she has had enough of him (skal omformuleres. Eg. She suddenly had enough of him = hun fik pludselig nok af ham. Eller she got enough of him = hun fik nok af ham. Eller she realised that he was too much = hun indså at han var for meget)… and deleted his emails.

Håber du kan tyde mine rettelser og bruge nogle af dem... :-)

Svar #11
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

jeg er sikker på at jeg kan bruge dine rettelser.. her er lige noget:

One the Website, KOMMA she saw a name KOMMA which surprised her, videlicet? (jeg er ikke sikker på hvad du mener her) Jed Cummingham.

det betyder "nemlig".. altså at hun var overrasket over at se hans navn..

//Shorty

Svar #12
02. marts 2006 af shortyboo (Slettet)

nu er jeg kommet helt igennem og takker mange gang for hjælpen!! :o) det er rigtig dejligt og få hjælp!

//Shorty..

(jeg har mange komma fejl, det er jeg heller ikke særlig god til!)

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