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02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)
... til at kigge denne tekst igennem, for evt fejl..
takker mange gange på forhånd;)

But as usual Casper is always backing out, when it becomes serious, and thereby become an arrogant idiot to Frank. This is of course a big part, of that message “clown” wish to give people. Because in the real world, lot of people thinks, that Casper Christensen is very arrogant, and by showing this big arrogance from Casper in “Clown”, it’s meaning, that people shall have their prejudices confirmed, so people can make their own censors in this.
One of mine favourite episodes is “Sommerhuset”/summerhouse. In this episode are Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben going to a summerhouse, near the water- a nice weekend, with relaxation and nice comfort. Frank and Casper drives in their own car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper, are picking up some hot Jung girls, just to give them a ride, which later shows to be a bad idea. But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, comes up to the summerhouse, and everything are just going fine. They are merry going to the beach, and while they are lien and taking sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go in the water with them, after which booth of them says- no, “because they are not swimming in the Danish cold water”. So while Iben and Mia, are swimming, Casper and frank takes a walk down the beach, and drinking some wine. And suddenly they are seeing to girls, which are the girls, they were giving a ride. They begin talking, and then the to hot Jung girls gives the same question like Mia and Iben, namely about if Casper and frank wants to go in the water with them, and in contrast to before, they are now saying yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the to girls. They are having lot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, by a stinging jellyfish, and the lifesaver saves now the very pitiable frank from “drowning”, and while he totally naked is lien at the beach, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but where Casper of course takes them away, because – this is to ugly for them, and thereby he becomes kind of a hero. When Casper and Frank comes back to Mia and Iben in the summerhouse, Mia and Iben, ask them about, where they have been, after which Frank and Casper tells them, that they just were swimming alone, and that Frank was unlucky to hurt his penis on a stinging jellyfish. But just when they have said that, The to Jung girls are coming, to hear how it goes with Franks penis – sounds very distrustfully. This releases a big discussion, and very slowly Casper is Chancing side, and tells Mia and Iben, that it was Franks fault at all, and that he all the time, has tried to stop Frank, and tell him, that these things are wrong. Which is totally upturned, when the truth is, that it was Casper, that wanted to do all these things, against want frank told him. Everyone besides Frank, are leaves the place, and Frank ended again as a “Clown”.
All the “clown” series is instructed by Frank Hvam and Casper Christensen themselves, and I think they are winners, because they have gained to make a good series, with such a plain but still funny humour. Besides that, I think their message, and things they are showing the Danish people, with their series, is just so cool. And I think, that they have catch the red thread, this realistic, and vulgar humour is just planed after my taste.


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Svar #1
02. april 2006 af SejeB (Slettet)

Jeg har lige skimtet din tekst.

Måske du skulle læse den igennem en ekstra gang, der er rigtig mange kongruensfejl.

Svar #2
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

ok men hvad er kongruensfejl helt bestemt..

Svar #3
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

kom nu teksten er jo heller ikke så lang...

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Svar #4
02. april 2006 af SejeB (Slettet)

kongruensfejl er når subjekt og verbum ikke stemmer overens
fx. "I are" dette er en kongruensfejl:)

Svar #5
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

ok.. vil du ikke godt rette den så??

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Svar #6
02. april 2006 af jordbærelefant (Slettet)

jeg fangede lige "hot jung girls". Det staves young, med mindre det er deres navn. Du har skrevet det flere gange. Jeg har skimmet den. Synes selv du skal læse den igennem en gang til.

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Svar #7
02. april 2006 af jordbærelefant (Slettet)

en ide kunne være at lave kortere sætninger. Så bliver det mere overskueligt og du har lettere ved at fange fx kongruensfejl.

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Svar #8
02. april 2006 af SejeB (Slettet)

Jeg er enig med Duara
Desuden får du jo ikke noget ud af at vi retter alle dine fejl

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Svar #9
02. april 2006 af LittleP (Slettet)

Som der også er blevet nævnt er der utrolig mange kongruens fejl - Og det er oftes dem som trækker karakteren ned! Da de betegnes som "Kiksede" fejl! ..

Svar #10
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

ok.. ja jeg plejer ikke have så mange af den slags fejl, men kan godt være det skyldes, at jeg har skrevet lige det stykke mens jeg var syg... såå men prøver at læse den igennem på et tidspunkt.

Svar #11
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

hehe lol nogle brølere jeg har begået nogle steder... hehe det vist meget godt at dobbeltlæse

Svar #12
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

men er der så ikke godt en som vil rette den, så jeg kan se, om mine rettelser er ok

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Svar #13
02. april 2006 af jammal (Slettet)

Der er som nævnte mange kongruensfejl fx "lots of people thinks"..Det hedder jo people think.. Husk også at komma på englesk ikke er som på dansk. På dansk har man " Jeg synes, at ..." Men på englesk har man ikke komma før "that"..Det har du også mange af. Men det der må du gerne bruge lidt tid på, fordi hvis du skal på gym. eller bare skal tale nogenlunde rigtig englesk, så er det vigtigt, at det er på plads...

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Svar #14
02. april 2006 af Tissi (Slettet)

#0
§1 Giv dit indlæg en sigende overskrift.
Ikke noget med at skrive "HJÆÆLP !!", "Rettelse" eller "Ekspert Søges". Brug hellere en længere overskrift hvori du inkluderer navnet på oversættelsen, forfatteren etc.

Svar #15
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

13# hvorfor hedder det ikke lot of people thinks, når det er flertal

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Svar #16
02. april 2006 af Bjarkee (Slettet)

Har du ikke snart fundet din livs kærlighed? ^^

Bjarke:D

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Svar #17
02. april 2006 af Bjarkee (Slettet)

#15) Jeg tror det er fordi, at hvis du sætter s på thinks så bliver det jo 3. person?


Bjarke

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Svar #18
02. april 2006 af Bjarkee (Slettet)

#16) dit

Svar #19
02. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

They are having allot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifesaver now saves the very pitiable frank from “drowning”, and while Frank totally naked is lien on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back

er meget i tvivl om denne strofe..

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