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Nogen der vil rette!!!
06. maj 2006 af
a-hvide (Slettet)
Hej har skrevet et essay på en ca 700 ord og håber at der er en herinde der har tid til at rette lidt på det.. kan godt være at noget af det er hurtigt skrevet men håber at der er en der vil afse lidt tid til at rette teksten...
på forhånd tak..
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Irregularities.
Affairs are a problem that is all over the world and there can be different kinds of affairs but a lot of the affairs are sexual because many are not satisfied or they miss some excitement in their life. Irregularities we hear about an affair between a secretary and her boss and how it develops.
The narrator is a girl who is a girl and she works a secretary and she has an affair with his boss who is a doctor. The narrator have on sister and she mean that she is the perfect girl and she look like Donna in hers attitude. The narrators also see Dr. Soleander as the perfect husband and she look forward to see him as a father because she is pregnant with him. The author give us that point that she can be a little bit afraid and telling dr. Soleander that she is pregnant for she might not now how he will react and she is afraid to lose him. In the beginning we hear that she do not like onion anymore because she did eat a lot of them just because she have hearted that it should help and she also stopped smoking that show us that she actually not are ready to get a baby and we hear also that it is the first time. The baby she have inside is an accident because Dr. Soleander not know that she is pregnant and the author write so that we might think that the narrator are desperate because she is lonely and then she are dreaming about that she I married to Dr. Soleander. After she get home from the conference with Dr. Soleander she loses her baby because she get a malfunctioning and then she only tell Soleander that she cant get pregnant anymore.
James Soleander is a doctor of medicine and he has an affair with his secretary and she is also waiting his baby but he does not know that. Dr Soleander maybe needs some excitement in his life because he has sex on the desk in his office with his secretary and that also show us that he is not very afraid that someone will discover it. In the end of the story Soleander are more with his wife and he stop having an affair with his secretary.
The main theme in the story is affairs and in the story we hear the most normal affair where it is a secretary boss affair and that is the kind of affairs we hear a lot of in the world but in this story there are no one there finds out that they have an affair and we do not hear if anyone is suspicious. Another theme in the story is how a person reacts when she is pregnant. The narrator changes the life when she finds out that she is pregnant. Before she was pregnant she did eat fast-food, drinking, and smoking. She will do all the best for the child and she starts thinking about to get married and she stopped smoking, drinking. She is always thinking of her child and how he will be.
The relationship between the narrator and Dr. Soleander is in the beginning a little affair where we only have heard that they have had sex onetime. When they go to the conference they are at the climax in the affair and it seems like that the author tell us that they live like husband and wife because we here that the narrator always is in the room where Soleander sleep. In the end of the story suddenly it just and because Dr. Soleander have had enough of the affair and it seems like that the narrator is more grown op than before. The relationship in the end of the story is just friendship but not much just the normal when it is between a secretary and her boss.
The story is built up is that in the beginning we here something that is irrelevant for the theme in the story because it is only in the beginning we here about the onions. In the middle of the story Courtney Jones uses directly speech and then there is a lot of describing again and so it continues. Courtney Jones have written in a first person narrator because we all the time reed I.
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på forhånd tak..
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Irregularities.
Affairs are a problem that is all over the world and there can be different kinds of affairs but a lot of the affairs are sexual because many are not satisfied or they miss some excitement in their life. Irregularities we hear about an affair between a secretary and her boss and how it develops.
The narrator is a girl who is a girl and she works a secretary and she has an affair with his boss who is a doctor. The narrator have on sister and she mean that she is the perfect girl and she look like Donna in hers attitude. The narrators also see Dr. Soleander as the perfect husband and she look forward to see him as a father because she is pregnant with him. The author give us that point that she can be a little bit afraid and telling dr. Soleander that she is pregnant for she might not now how he will react and she is afraid to lose him. In the beginning we hear that she do not like onion anymore because she did eat a lot of them just because she have hearted that it should help and she also stopped smoking that show us that she actually not are ready to get a baby and we hear also that it is the first time. The baby she have inside is an accident because Dr. Soleander not know that she is pregnant and the author write so that we might think that the narrator are desperate because she is lonely and then she are dreaming about that she I married to Dr. Soleander. After she get home from the conference with Dr. Soleander she loses her baby because she get a malfunctioning and then she only tell Soleander that she cant get pregnant anymore.
James Soleander is a doctor of medicine and he has an affair with his secretary and she is also waiting his baby but he does not know that. Dr Soleander maybe needs some excitement in his life because he has sex on the desk in his office with his secretary and that also show us that he is not very afraid that someone will discover it. In the end of the story Soleander are more with his wife and he stop having an affair with his secretary.
The main theme in the story is affairs and in the story we hear the most normal affair where it is a secretary boss affair and that is the kind of affairs we hear a lot of in the world but in this story there are no one there finds out that they have an affair and we do not hear if anyone is suspicious. Another theme in the story is how a person reacts when she is pregnant. The narrator changes the life when she finds out that she is pregnant. Before she was pregnant she did eat fast-food, drinking, and smoking. She will do all the best for the child and she starts thinking about to get married and she stopped smoking, drinking. She is always thinking of her child and how he will be.
The relationship between the narrator and Dr. Soleander is in the beginning a little affair where we only have heard that they have had sex onetime. When they go to the conference they are at the climax in the affair and it seems like that the author tell us that they live like husband and wife because we here that the narrator always is in the room where Soleander sleep. In the end of the story suddenly it just and because Dr. Soleander have had enough of the affair and it seems like that the narrator is more grown op than before. The relationship in the end of the story is just friendship but not much just the normal when it is between a secretary and her boss.
The story is built up is that in the beginning we here something that is irrelevant for the theme in the story because it is only in the beginning we here about the onions. In the middle of the story Courtney Jones uses directly speech and then there is a lot of describing again and so it continues. Courtney Jones have written in a first person narrator because we all the time reed I.
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Svar #1
06. maj 2006 af htxFREAK (Slettet)
Engelsk grammatik er ikke lige det jeg er bedst til, men vil da gerne prøve:
1.)Affairs are a problem that is all over the world and there can be different kinds of affairs..
Hvis jeg var sig ville jeg skrive det sådan her i stedet for (altså vill jeg inddrage et punktum):
1.)Affairs are a problem that is all over the world. There can be different kinds of affairs..
Da din næste "bosk" begynder, starter den sådan her:
2.) The narrator is a girl who is a girl
Det er underligt at skrive sådan? Selvfølgelig er hun er pige hvis hun er en pige? :p
3.) and she works a secretary and she has an affair with his boss who is a doctor.
Burde der ikke stå at hun arbejder SOM en sekretær..? Du har sådan set skrev "og hun harbejder en sekretær, og har en affære med hans chef som er en læde"
Har desværre ikke tid til at rette mere, men jeg håber du kan bruge noget af det :)
1.)Affairs are a problem that is all over the world and there can be different kinds of affairs..
Hvis jeg var sig ville jeg skrive det sådan her i stedet for (altså vill jeg inddrage et punktum):
1.)Affairs are a problem that is all over the world. There can be different kinds of affairs..
Da din næste "bosk" begynder, starter den sådan her:
2.) The narrator is a girl who is a girl
Det er underligt at skrive sådan? Selvfølgelig er hun er pige hvis hun er en pige? :p
3.) and she works a secretary and she has an affair with his boss who is a doctor.
Burde der ikke stå at hun arbejder SOM en sekretær..? Du har sådan set skrev "og hun harbejder en sekretær, og har en affære med hans chef som er en læde"
Har desværre ikke tid til at rette mere, men jeg håber du kan bruge noget af det :)
Svar #2
06. maj 2006 af a-hvide (Slettet)
takker, engelsk er ikke min stærke side så det du har hjulpet mig med hjælper mig meget så mange tak
Svar #3
06. maj 2006 af a-hvide (Slettet)
er der ikke andre der har tid.. kan godt nøjes med at få den rettede udgave i morgen
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