Rette? et par linier??

Haii har lige ændret lidt..,

Hallo my name is Signe Fog Nielsen. I am (15) fifteen years old. Im from a lillte town call Slagballe, about (20) twenty kilometre from this school. I live on a farm with my mom, dad and sister. My dad work as a farmer, my moms is a prison officer, and my sister hand out the news papers every sonday. I also have a big brother, but he dosn’t live at home, he have his own house an work as a painter.
And then about my spare time... Nomally I use all my spartime to make gymnaste. It is also the reason why I pick this school, so I can make a lot gymnastic. In my spare time I also am togehter with my friends.
I am very happy to be on this school, with all this young happy people, how want to get somthing out of thers (deres) life.



Det skal siges at jeg lige er begyndt på efterskole..., så det er den skole jeg skriver lidt om..??

Har rettet, og sat / / om de ændrede steder:

H/e/llo my name is Signe Fog Nielsen. I am (15) fifteen years old. I/'/m from a li/ttl/e town call/ed/ Slagballe, about (20) twenty kilomet/ers/ from this school. I live on a farm with my mom, dad and sister. My dad work/s/ as a farmer, my mom// is a prison officer, and my sister hand/s/ out the news//papers every s/u/nday. I also have a big brother, but he do/e/sn’t live at home, he ha/s/ his own house an/d/ work as a painter.
And then about my spare time... No/r/mally I use all my spar/e/ time to make gymnast/ics/. It is also the reason why I pick/ed/ this school, so I can make a lot /of/ gymnastic/s/. In my spare time I /am also/ toge/th/er with my friends.
I am very happy to be on this school, with all th/ese/ young happy people, /who/ want to get somthing out of the/ir/ (deres) life.

Nogle få rettelser til #2

sunday --> Sunday
own house and work --> own house and works
on this school --> enten bruges "in this school" eller "at this school"
somthing --> something

"... No/r/mally I use all my spar/e/ time to make gymnast/ics/. "

Umiddelbart ville jeg sige:
"... No/r/mally I use all my spar/e/ time to DO gymnast/ics/. "

#0
Du bør nok bestemme dig for, om du vil bruge sammentrækninger "I am = I'm" eller ej, for det roder du rundt i. :)