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forkorte?

30. august 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)
nogen ideer til hvad jeg kan forkort her, for at det ikke bliver så langt, men hvor man stadig får de vigtigste handlinger med?

This fairytale is about a mother and her daughter, where the mother in an accident, tells the king, that her daughter can spin five skeins at one day, which is a big lie, because the daughter doesn’t even know how to spin. The king is very impressed, and said that he wants to marry the daughter, and that she in the first eleven moths they are together shall have everything she wants, but then in the last month she has to spin five skeins every day, because I f she doesn’t, he will kill her. The king and the daughter were married and the daughter gets what ever she wants. But In the last month she has to spin, and she can’t. But then she meets a little black thing with a long tail, and he says he can spin all the skeins for her every day, but to make a deal, he will give her three guesses every night to guess his name, and if she cant before the month ends up, she shall marriage him, and she says ok. But of course she can’t guess his name, until the last day, where the king unknown about what is going on, tells the daughter the little black things name. And so in her last guess she guess its name, and that’s the end of the story.

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05. september 2006 af Pathatlon (Slettet)

For det første er det skrevet virkelig folkeskole-agtigt.

Jeg har ingen anelse om hvad "this fairytale" er for et, så sig istedet

"In the fairytale -name - we meet a mother and her daughter. One day the mother, in other to impress the king, accidentally tells him that her daughter can spin five skeins a day. The King is so impressed that he offers a marriage to the daughter, telling her that in the first eleven months everything she wishes shall be hers, but in the 12th she shall spin five skeins a day otherwise he will kill her. But when the 12th month comes around the daughter is unable to spin, but finds help from a black creature, which gives her tree guesses a day to find out his name otherwise she will have to marry him. She agrees. However, she cannot guess his name, and not before the last day, when the King unknowingly tells the name, does she succeed in finding its name in her last try.

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det var meget... dårligt også, indrømmer jeg, men det er en start henimod hvad jeg gerne vil have og hvad det burde være. Er bedre når jeg har det foran mig og ikke har ondt i kroppen :S :P held og lykke

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