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19. februar 2007 af Koppel (Slettet)
Everybody talks about New Luxury, a phenomenon, that comes from USA, and in the years around us, is spreading to large parts of the western world. Including Denmark. Trend scientists believes, that it is caused, because luxury have become democratized – the middleclass spoils it self with branded goods, that once were reserved to the over class. There is no doubt, that people spend considerable more money then before, but the paradoxical is, the both low-price and luxury have success now. The Danes is saving on the daily purchase and shops in the discount –supermarkets to could afford buying luxury goods.


Så er jeg meget taknemmelig.
Har nemlig glemt min mappe i skolen med rettelser af gamle oversættelser, så aner ikk hvad jeg skal sætte finger på - den er nemlig til i morgen. (ups)

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Svar #1
19. februar 2007 af growern (Slettet)

Altså synes ikke umiddelbart der er noget at sætte en finger på.

Det eneste som jeg måske ville ændre var:".. because luxury (have<---has) become democratized.."

has i stedet for have, men er ikke 100% sikker

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19. februar 2007 af AllstarHo (Slettet)

Everybody talks about New Luxury, a phenomenon, that comes from USA, and in the years around us, is spreading to large parts of the western world. Including Denmark. Trend scientists BELIEVE, that it is caused BY luxury HAVING become democratized – the middle class spoils ITSELF with branded goods, that once were reserved FOR the UPPER class. There is no doubt, that people spend considerabLY more money THAN before, but the paradoxical is that both low-price and luxury now have success. The Danes ARE saving MONEY on daily purchaseS and BY shopPING in the discount–supermarkets IN ORDER FOR THEM TO BE ABLE TO afford buying luxury goods.

Hej. Dette er umiddelbart de fejl jeg kunne finde.

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Svar #3
19. februar 2007 af AllstarHo (Slettet)

I den sidste sætning kan du bare nøjes med at sige "In order for them to afford buying.." - Det er kortere og mindre kompliceret.. (;

Svar #4
20. februar 2007 af Koppel (Slettet)

Mange tak, er glad for hjælpen i går :-)

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