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Engelsk - lille rettelse..
25. marts 2004 af
Yani (Slettet)
hey.. hmm har lige lavet noget engelsk.. vil i være søde og få det lige læst igennem..:/ hmm TAK alligevel!
Kylas birthday
The text about birthday traditions in her family. She has no longer traditions because she is now grow up. Her last birthday was then she became 16. The last birthday she doesn’t know they just had a good time. She rented a big place outside with different activities. They have a water-ballon fight, set it up with bobbing for apples, and pin-the-tail-on-the-donkey and a piñata. A piñata is an animal where you full it up with candy and you beat it until it breaks. Then it break fall there candy to all them.
She meant that you got your self driving license and maybe your car also. And she think also it is easier to find a job then you are 16.
The most specific for Kyla is her present from her father. It got a car, Fiat Tempo. Her grandpa took it to the shop and goy everything fixed on it. It was her best present ever.
She talking also about that she surprised peoples to their birthday. Some people have favorite color and are very concrete. So it is easier to find different presents. And the telling end with she have forgot birthdays before.
Kylas birthday
The text about birthday traditions in her family. She has no longer traditions because she is now grow up. Her last birthday was then she became 16. The last birthday she doesn’t know they just had a good time. She rented a big place outside with different activities. They have a water-ballon fight, set it up with bobbing for apples, and pin-the-tail-on-the-donkey and a piñata. A piñata is an animal where you full it up with candy and you beat it until it breaks. Then it break fall there candy to all them.
She meant that you got your self driving license and maybe your car also. And she think also it is easier to find a job then you are 16.
The most specific for Kyla is her present from her father. It got a car, Fiat Tempo. Her grandpa took it to the shop and goy everything fixed on it. It was her best present ever.
She talking also about that she surprised peoples to their birthday. Some people have favorite color and are very concrete. So it is easier to find different presents. And the telling end with she have forgot birthdays before.
Svar #1
25. marts 2004 af Fingersen (Slettet)
Kyla's birthday
The text revolves around birthday traditions in Kyla's family.
She does not celebrate old traditions because she has become an independent adult.
She celebrated her last birthday when she reached 16. Apart from the fact that she had a good time, she cannot fully remember her 16th birthday.
She rented a big place and they threw water balloons at one another... = det næste er en værre gang sludder. Ved ikke hvordan jeg skal rette det, men du må selv lige finde ud af et bedre forslag.
A pinata is an animal you fill up.... and beat until...
When it breaks, candy bursts out of it and everybody can get their share of it depending on how fast they are.
Det næste paragraf passer overhovedet ikke ind i billedet. Hvad har kørekort og det at det er nemmere at få et job som 16-årig noget med fødselsdag og slik ud af udstoppede dyr af gøre.
The best thing that happens for Kyla on her birthday is when her father gives her a present. He gives her a Fiat Tempo, which her grandfather later takes to a mechanic who fixes it.
She also talks about how she surprised other family members and friends at their birthdays.
Det sidste er også noget være sludder og er meget svært at rette i. Håber lige du lige gør en ekstra indsats for det savner den her stil lidt. Undskyld sproget, men det gør den!
MHV
Fingersen
The text revolves around birthday traditions in Kyla's family.
She does not celebrate old traditions because she has become an independent adult.
She celebrated her last birthday when she reached 16. Apart from the fact that she had a good time, she cannot fully remember her 16th birthday.
She rented a big place and they threw water balloons at one another... = det næste er en værre gang sludder. Ved ikke hvordan jeg skal rette det, men du må selv lige finde ud af et bedre forslag.
A pinata is an animal you fill up.... and beat until...
When it breaks, candy bursts out of it and everybody can get their share of it depending on how fast they are.
Det næste paragraf passer overhovedet ikke ind i billedet. Hvad har kørekort og det at det er nemmere at få et job som 16-årig noget med fødselsdag og slik ud af udstoppede dyr af gøre.
The best thing that happens for Kyla on her birthday is when her father gives her a present. He gives her a Fiat Tempo, which her grandfather later takes to a mechanic who fixes it.
She also talks about how she surprised other family members and friends at their birthdays.
Det sidste er også noget være sludder og er meget svært at rette i. Håber lige du lige gør en ekstra indsats for det savner den her stil lidt. Undskyld sproget, men det gør den!
MHV
Fingersen
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