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rettelse af business letter
22. september 2007 af
meross (Slettet)
Business letter
Pat Collins
North West Dairies
34 Hazel Grove
Stockport Cheshire SK7 5SD
28 September 2007
Mr. Gerard Houllier
Liverpool Football Club
Anfield Road
Liverpool 40 TH
Dear Sir
In my capacity as a director for the biggest dairy in England I have among other things followed with the newspaper about the plans that involve that sport stars should be told about alcohols harmful effect.
As role models they are for the youth and for many adults, it is important that they feel responsible.
Therefore it is important for me that the direction in this issue is changed and we can offer you to be sponsor for the club.
We are of course ready to discuss the condition for this sponsorship and I will definite mean that we easily can be agree about conditions etc. so that all benefit.
We can among other things offer fee consume of our products.
Should this be of interest to you I must draw you attention to the fact that we of course expect that the club advertise for our products.
Yours faithfully
Pat Collins
Pat Collins
North West Dairies
34 Hazel Grove
Stockport Cheshire SK7 5SD
28 September 2007
Mr. Gerard Houllier
Liverpool Football Club
Anfield Road
Liverpool 40 TH
Dear Sir
In my capacity as a director for the biggest dairy in England I have among other things followed with the newspaper about the plans that involve that sport stars should be told about alcohols harmful effect.
As role models they are for the youth and for many adults, it is important that they feel responsible.
Therefore it is important for me that the direction in this issue is changed and we can offer you to be sponsor for the club.
We are of course ready to discuss the condition for this sponsorship and I will definite mean that we easily can be agree about conditions etc. so that all benefit.
We can among other things offer fee consume of our products.
Should this be of interest to you I must draw you attention to the fact that we of course expect that the club advertise for our products.
Yours faithfully
Pat Collins
Svar #1
22. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)
Jeg ville ikke sige "with the newspaper". "follwed the newspapers" er fint nok.
"can be agree" = "Can agree" -Fast udtryk på engelsk at undlade udsagnsordet i dette tilfælde.
fee=free. ikke også ? :)
"can be agree" = "Can agree" -Fast udtryk på engelsk at undlade udsagnsordet i dette tilfælde.
fee=free. ikke også ? :)
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