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Dansk-Engelsk oversættelse (rettelse)
23. oktober 2007 af
Cutie-Pei (Slettet)
Jeg sidder med et referat af teksten The Shining Mountain som jeg skal oversætte til engelsk, og kunne godt tænke mig en smule hjælp til at få den rettet.
Den danske tekst ser således ud:
The Shining Mountain er et moderne eventyr om en far, der vil have, at hans datter skal være ligeså hårdfør, stolt og stærk, som han er. Hun må ikke være ligesom de andre almindelige piger i Skotland. Hun skal være usædvanlig. Pigen er bange for at skuffe sin far, der er en berømt bjergbestiger. Da faderen tager hende med til the Shining Mountain, fortæller hun ham derfor ikke at hun er bange, træt og svag. Til sidst, da bjerggudinden får faderen til at tro, at han har mistet sin datter, fordi hun var bange for at skuffe ham, forstår han sin fejltagelse. Da han bryder sammen og græder, skammer Pangma-La sig ikke længere, og nu er hun ikke længere bange for at skuffe sin far.
Min oversættelse:
The Shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She can not be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl is afraid of disappointing her father, who is a famous mountaineer. That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid, weary and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. In the end, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid of disappointing him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La does no longer feels ashamed and she is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
Håber i gider at hjælpe mig lidt (:
Den danske tekst ser således ud:
The Shining Mountain er et moderne eventyr om en far, der vil have, at hans datter skal være ligeså hårdfør, stolt og stærk, som han er. Hun må ikke være ligesom de andre almindelige piger i Skotland. Hun skal være usædvanlig. Pigen er bange for at skuffe sin far, der er en berømt bjergbestiger. Da faderen tager hende med til the Shining Mountain, fortæller hun ham derfor ikke at hun er bange, træt og svag. Til sidst, da bjerggudinden får faderen til at tro, at han har mistet sin datter, fordi hun var bange for at skuffe ham, forstår han sin fejltagelse. Da han bryder sammen og græder, skammer Pangma-La sig ikke længere, og nu er hun ikke længere bange for at skuffe sin far.
Min oversættelse:
The Shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She can not be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl is afraid of disappointing her father, who is a famous mountaineer. That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid, weary and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. In the end, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid of disappointing him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La does no longer feels ashamed and she is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
Håber i gider at hjælpe mig lidt (:
Svar #1
23. oktober 2007 af mm :) (Slettet)
When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La no longer feels ashamed and now she is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
Svar #2
24. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Der var ikke meget at rette, her er mine forslag:
The Shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She (is not allowed to) be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl is afraid of disappointing her father, who is a famous mountaineer. That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid, weary and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. In the end, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid of disappointing him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La does no longer (feel) ashamed and she is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
The Shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She (is not allowed to) be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl is afraid of disappointing her father, who is a famous mountaineer. That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid, weary and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. In the end, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid of disappointing him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La does no longer (feel) ashamed and she is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
Svar #3
24. oktober 2007 af ahsee0003 (Slettet)
Ønsker kun en familie
En juleaften jeg var på en gade med flotte villaer hvor jeg var den eneste fattig mand på gaden jeg havde ikke nogen familier. Min familie var død og jeg var den eneste der overlevende fra min familie min mor døde i en bilulykke med min far da jeg var 6 år. De næste 10 år var jeg sammen med min onkel han behandlede mig rigtig dårligt så jeg flyttede fra ham da jeg var 16 år og begyndte at arbejdet i luft havnen jeg arbejde der kun 1 måned også ved jeg ikke hvorfor jeg blev fyret. Det var fordi de troede at jeg havde taget penge men det gjorde jeg ikke det var en anden som også blev fyret efter en uge også ringede
En juleaften jeg var på en gade med flotte villaer hvor jeg var den eneste fattig mand på gaden jeg havde ikke nogen familier. Min familie var død og jeg var den eneste der overlevende fra min familie min mor døde i en bilulykke med min far da jeg var 6 år. De næste 10 år var jeg sammen med min onkel han behandlede mig rigtig dårligt så jeg flyttede fra ham da jeg var 16 år og begyndte at arbejdet i luft havnen jeg arbejde der kun 1 måned også ved jeg ikke hvorfor jeg blev fyret. Det var fordi de troede at jeg havde taget penge men det gjorde jeg ikke det var en anden som også blev fyret efter en uge også ringede
Svar #4
25. oktober 2007 af Cutie-Pei (Slettet)
Okay, har rettet de fejl jeg kunne finde og den ser ud sådan ud:
The Shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She is not allowed be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl is afraid of disappointing her father, who is a famous mountaineer. That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid, weary and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. In the end, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid of disappointing him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La does no longer feel ashamed and is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
The Shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, who wants his daughter to be just as tough, proud, and strong as he is. She is not allowed be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She has to be unusual. The girl is afraid of disappointing her father, who is a famous mountaineer. That is why she does not tell him that she is afraid, weary and weak, when he takes her to the Shining Mountain. In the end, when the mountain goddess makes the father believe that he has lost his daughter, because she was afraid of disappointing him, he understands his mistake. When he breaks down and cries, Pangma-La does no longer feel ashamed and is no longer afraid of disappointing her father.
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