Studieretningsprojekt/-opgave (SRP/SRO)
Abstract .... Rette
19. december 2007 af
toffiedk (Slettet)
Hej er der nogle der vil kigge mit abstract igennem for fejl?
This study investigates the account of the golden section as well as the occurrence from this in respectively the nature, art and architecture. More specifically is the number phi being mentioned in connection to the golden section. The golden section is also being established in a right-angled triangle as well as it establishes the occurrence of the golden section in the Pentagram. The Fibonacci numbers are also being mentioned in a further connection to the golden section by producing evidences from the formula of Binet. The scientific faculty has been used to establish the occurrence of the golden section from different claims and theories. The humanistic faculty has been used to establish the occurrence in the nature, art and architecture and by reading historically facts about the golden section. Although it seems that some scientists doubt the fact that the golden section is being used in art and architecture.
This study investigates the account of the golden section as well as the occurrence from this in respectively the nature, art and architecture. More specifically is the number phi being mentioned in connection to the golden section. The golden section is also being established in a right-angled triangle as well as it establishes the occurrence of the golden section in the Pentagram. The Fibonacci numbers are also being mentioned in a further connection to the golden section by producing evidences from the formula of Binet. The scientific faculty has been used to establish the occurrence of the golden section from different claims and theories. The humanistic faculty has been used to establish the occurrence in the nature, art and architecture and by reading historically facts about the golden section. Although it seems that some scientists doubt the fact that the golden section is being used in art and architecture.
Svar #1
19. december 2007 af waqas2800 (Slettet)
Ikke for at være for kritisk, men den er lidt på den forkerte side af skalaen. For det første tog det mig et halv snes tid for at finde ud af at det var det gyldnesnit der var tale om. Du skal rette dit engelsk, der re en del fejl (grammatik), men dette er typisk for eleveer med dansk som modermål (jeg har engelsk som mådermål), jeg kan desværre ikke rette den altså således at den bliver bedre, kan kun rette de gramatiske fejl, men prøv at skrive en ny abstract, denne er lidt tynd. Du skriver ikke peæcist om brugen af metoderne indenfor de diverse fakulteter, og der er ikke en sammenhæng mellem det gyldne snit og dine sætniger om phi. Jeg forstår ikk engang det første sætning.
prøv igen kammerat ;)
prøv igen kammerat ;)
Skriv et svar til: Abstract .... Rette
Du skal være logget ind, for at skrive et svar til dette spørgsmål. Klik her for at logge ind.
Har du ikke en bruger på Studieportalen.dk?
Klik her for at oprette en bruger.