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Haster, kan det skrives på en anden måde.

12. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

It was the 29th Nov the night before the 30th my fly crashes. 150 passengers was found dead, Only me and another survived the accident. It was at night the hole occurred, I think it was an violent night with rain, thunderstorm and it was not fun.

kan det skrives på en anden måde?
er i ikke søde at rette de(mange) fejl.
i må også gerne sætte mere til ..

Svar #1
12. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

It was the 29th Nov the night before the 30th Nov 1990. That’s night was not funny for anyone, it was violent with rain and thunderstorm. My airplane was not easy to steer, the airplane had the control over me. On the way, crashes airplane down on a island whit nothing. 150 passenger was found dead, many people screamed then the airplane took the control and flying towards the dead.

har lige skrevet det om så kig på denne ..
kan det skrives på en bedre måde
er i ikk søde at rette de mange fejl
og i må gere tilføje mere.

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Svar #2
12. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Mit bud på rettelser:

It was the 29th (of) Nov(ember,) the night before the 30th (of) Nov(ember,) 1990. That/’s/ night was not funny for anyone/,/(;) it was /violent/ (extreme weather) with (heavy) rain and thunderstorm. My airplane was not easy to steer/,/(.) /the/(The) airplane had the control over me. On /the/(its) way, /crashes/(the) airplane (crashed) down on a(n) island /whit nothing/(without anything). 150 passenger /was/(were) found dead/,/(.) /many/(Many) people screamed /then/(when) the airplane took (over) the control and /flying/(flew) /towards the dead/(into death).

/.../ = slettes
(...) = indsættes

Bare spørg, hvis du har spørgsmål.

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Svar #3
12. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

150 passenger --> 150 passengers

Svar #4
12. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

_ kan den rettes så der er mere indhold iden?
kan du det?

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Svar #5
12. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Husk at tilføje mindst ét tegn i de private beskeder du sender, ellers kan man ikke åbne beskeden.

It was the 29th of November, the night before the 30th of November, 1990. That night was not funny for anyone; it was extreme weather with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My airplane was not easy to steer. The airplane had the control over me. On its way, the airplane crashed down on an island without anything. 150 passengers were found dead. Many people screamed when the airplane took over the control and flew into death.

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Svar #6
12. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#4.
Det er ikke min opgave at tilføje mere indhold til teksten. Du kan evt. selv finde på noget og smide teksten ind her igen.

Svar #7
12. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

_ okay jeg synes bare det er lidt svært..
men hvis du lige kunne komme med et eks.
ville det være godt.

& mange tak .

Svar #8
12. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

It was the 29th of November, the night before the 30th of November, 1990. That night were not funny for anyone; it was extreme weather with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me, the aeroplane swayed around without control. On its way, the aeroplane crashed down on a deserted island. All the passengers screamed when the aeroplane took the control and flew towards the into death. 150 passenger were found dead. Its were Only me an another person there survived then tragiced unhappines.

^hvad med nu??

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Svar #9
12. januar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Hvis Zeta ikke vil tilføje indhold til din tekst/mener, at du selv skal komme med et bud, så er der jo heller ikke en chance for, at hun vil komme med et eksempel, vel?!
TanteOda

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Svar #10
12. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#8.
Her har jeg rettet de værste fejl:

It was the 29th of November, the night before the 30th of November, 1990. That night was not funny for anyone; it was extreme weather with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me as it was swaying around without my involvement. On its way, the aeroplane crashed down on a deserted island. All of the passengers screamed when the aeroplane took the control and flew into death. 150 passengers were found dead. It was only me and another passenger who survived this tragic incident.

#10.
hun --> han

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Svar #11
12. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

extreme weather --> ell: awful weather

Svar #12
12. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

Okay mange tak ..
jeg skriver noget mere til d, og sætter den ind igen :)'
håber i også vil kigge på den

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