En der vil rette en kort engelsk stil?

jeg vil godt ret hvis du vil os hjælp mig med nogle få oversættelser :D

Selvfølgelig, men er altså ikke den bedste til engelsk. Har desværre heller ikke så meget tid, da jeg er ved at skrive opgave, så det skal bare være meget korte oversættelser.

#0.
Har det stadigvæk interesse? Btw. bør overskriften være "My attitude towards politics".

Ja, det kan du tro. Det ville virkelig være skønt hvis du gad hjælpe :)

Okay. Giv mig lige fem minutter.

Selvfølgelig, det er virkelig sødt af dig :)

Mit bud (ikke nødvendigvis 100% korrekt):


My attitude/s to/(towards) politics

My attitude to(wards) politics can be described as relaxed, but I am not /indifferent/(unconcerned).

There are /some/(certain) things in politics /as/(for example) immigrants, healthcare and rights/,/ that I really care about, because it /means so much fore/(matters a great deal to) people(')s welfare and well-being.

Politics is about /the/(that particular) politician /that/ we have chosen to represent our /attitude to/(position on) different things and that is also our way to have influence (on) /to what happens/(happenings) in our country, i.e. we /chose who/(choose the person) we want to solve the problems that /can some up/(arise) in the society /that/ we live in every day.

Examples could be: How do we /make sure that there aren’t so many unemployed/(manage to have a low unemployment rate), how do we /avoid/(prevent) war(s) or how /can/(do) we make sure that the young /once/ learn enough in /the/ schools etc.

I /mean that’s/(think it is) important to have a society/,/ that can take care of those who are ill and weak and /that/ make sure that law and order is kept.

/Right now/(At the moment) I think that the Danish politicians concentrate/s/ to(o) much /of/(on) the parties(') individual “game” in/ /stead of concentrating on what their (actual) job is, namely to improve the health /authorities/(service) and /make better environment plans/(formulate a better environmental policy) for the future.


/It’s/(It is) so important that we all focus on being a better country, because there /is/(are) so many people/,/ who are /pure/(poor) or/e/ just do/n’t have/ (not got) the same welfare as you and me.

Those people are scrums* and that is our, i.e. the politicians('), duty to help those people /out on/(into) the labour market and forward in the world.

*det ord har jeg ikke hørt før

(...) = indsættes
/.../ = slettes

Bare stil spørgsmål og sig endelig til, hvis du ikke forstår rettelserne.

Det betyder udstødte :) Hehe.. Vidste ikke lige hvad jeg ellers skulle brugt..

Jeg ville nok benytte 'outcasts' om udstødte mennesker.

Nårh, selvfølgelig.. Forstår ikke helt den her rettelse: Politics is about that particular politician we have chosen to represent our position on different things and that is also our way to have influence on what happens/(happenings) in our country,

her er det:



My attitude to politics

My attitude to politics can be described as a relaxed, but I am not indifferent. There are a number of things in politics as immigrants, health and rights, that I really care, because it means so much foreground peoples welfare and wellbeing.
Politics is about the politician that we have chosen for our attitude to different things and this is our way to influence what is happening in our country, so we chose who we want to solve the problems that some that the society we live in every day. Examples might be: How can we ensure that there are not so many unemployed, how can we avoid war, or how can we ensure that once the young learn enough in the schools and so on.
I mean it is important to have a society which can provide for those who are ill and weak and that sure that law and order is maintained. At this moment I think that the Danish politicians are too many of the individual parties "game" rather than concentrating on what their job is, which is to improve the health and a better environment plans for the future. It is therefore important that we all focus on a better country because there are so many people who pure ore simply not the same as the welfare of you and me. Those people are scrums and that is us, that is to say, the politicians, the duty to these people in the labour market and in the world.

Har godtnok fået en anden til at rette, ellers skal du have tusind tak :)

#10.
"...influence on happenings in our country". Hvis det var dét, der var problemet :-)

Det var det, tusind tak :)