Er der nogle der vil hjælpe? :)

 Hej alle.

Jeg har lige skrevet denne stil, og jeg tænkte på om der var nogen der havde tid og lyst til at gennemgå den for grammatiske fejl m.m  Måske andre gode råd til forbedringer?

Det ville jeg blive super glad for :-)

På forhånd mange tak.

(ps. den er til morgen 19 september (og jeg ved godt jeg sent ude))

When I am standing with my graduation papers. Will I be overwhelmed with happiness and freedom. Now is it time to experience the world.
The first thing I am going to do, is to go travelling around the world.

My cosin Helena Jakobsen is finish, with her A-levels, one year ahead of me. So she is waiting for me in 2010. So the following week I graduate(2011), will we be on our way out in the big world.
First are we going to Ethiopian, located in east Africa. There are many chrildren who are starving in Ethiopian. Lisa and I are going to Africa with the danish organization 'Red barnet', as self-determining helpers. We want to help and try to make a little difference. After what we have planned, are we going to be in Ethiopian about six months. After that is it a little unsecure what we are going to do. We have planned to see France, England and some of Asia. But we have to see where the wind takes us. 164

My life in 10-20 years' time? Oh, it is hard to tell. I have many dreams for the future. But they can go in another direction. I have done som reflections of what I am going to study. I am very interrested in psychology. So I have considered being a welfare officer or a psychologist. A childish and maybee a little foolish dream I have is to be an actress, my big passion is drama and theatre. But it is not something you can count on, because it is a unstable career. But maybee, should I just follow my dream and go into it.
One thing is for sure, I am going to have a very big family – a husband and a lots of children. We are going to live in a big, cosy, enjoyable abandoed farm with a lots of animals.
20 years from now. My thougts are flowing. The 15th of september 2028. I see my self standing in a little pink room with a cradle, there is four children running around me, they are playing and shouting. My stomach is big. I am pregant. A tall man is holding around my shoulder, he is looking sweet. There is a big smil on my face..