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The study investigates how life in the trenches was for the participating British soldiers during World War 1 - which consequences were there, what did the soldiers do to get through the rough time and why did they stay in war? Several websites and books has been used to get a conclusion on this problem, and methods as being critic against literature is one of the most important thing in this case. This is because World War 1 was executed for about 100 years ago, and since that time there have been a lot of different writers with each their point of view – and you have to find out which of them is right. The study concludes that Great Britain was during World War 1 a part of the bloodstained trench war near the western front. The trench war had fatal consequences for the participating soldiers - consequences that resulted in physical and mental disorders, and in worst case the death – actually over 500.000 British soldiers died, and mental disorders as Post-Traumatic Stress disorder (PTSD) and stress were very usual for the soldiers. Many of the soldiers wrote poems to get through the rough time – poems that in many cases describe soldier’s view on the war. A clear thing is, they didn’t like the war, but facts as pride on honor were dominant here, and this is one of the reasons why the British soldiers staid and fight for their country.

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