brug for en retter, tak :D' hurtigt

hej alle sammen.
jeg er gået lidt i stå, med hvad jeg skal skrive så hvis i måske vil læse det her igennem og rette det og evt. fortælle hvad jeg mere kunne skrive ville være super fedt gerne inden for 2-3 dage.

I’m now 25 years old. I live in a very small flat with my girlfriend, her name is  iris. My girlfriend has also killed a person when she was a teenager, and she got more problems now then me, after hers episode. I can still remember this day when I killed Jackson, I can’t understand why I did it, and I didn’t mean to stab him, but I was scarred for him that day I don’t know why, but I was it. I got a verdict of ten years. It was not fun to sit in there so many year, but I need to do it. There was someone other people there also was inside there and they should sit there in for a lot of year someone had life imprisonment, I very happy for it not was me, if it was me so had I killed my self just after 20 years, because I wouldn’t take it.