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Her er så endnu et engelsk resumé, denne gang af 'Harry's game'.. Kunne godt bruge en hjælpende hånd til at rette det. og her kommer det så:

Summary of
‘Harry’s game’
A book written by Gerald Seymour

An English minister, Henry Danby, was shot in London in the early morning by a man from the IRA. Agent Harry Brown was chose to find the murderer, because he knew a lot about the place he was going to, Belfast, and how to speak like they do in that area, because he was born near by. He also got his surname changed to ‘McEvoy’, so that people would not have any suspicious thoughts about him.
During his ‘mission’, he stayed with a lady he knew before he had moved to London, Mrs Duncan, who runs some sort of ‘Bed & Breakfast’, I think.
Sometimes the woman Josephine came and helped Mrs Duncan. The first day they met, her and Harry went to a party, and they soon got a crush on each other.
It was also at the party Harry the first times saw the killer of Henry Danby: Billy Downs. At that time he did not know it was him, but in the end he caught him and shot him in the chest, killed him.
 

på forhånd tak :D