dårlig karak´ter :((

Hvorfor ikke sætte det ind her? Så er der mulighed for at flere kan rette `? /

ville først finde ud af om nogen overhovedet kunne:) men her er den ihvertfald:

1. The methods of surveillance which is mentioned in the text; Keeping 1984 in the Past” is among other things surveillance via cameras. In the text they talk about how they make use of the cameras. They make use of the cameras to hide them, so people can’t see them. Then they can pursue what is happing.
The other form for using surveillance is the internet. You will be watched from your own computer. It will be your internet your internet service could see what you do on the internet, even thought they couldn’t se you self. Hereby the internet service could see which webpage you visit. The emails you send and receive will bee watching.
The third form for surveillance which is mentioned in the text is about communication. Through communication they watch the individual via telephone or mobile. Your conversation will be watched, in other words they watched what you talk about. Even the SMS – messages you send and receive will bee watched.
In the text they also talk about that your vehicle u. a will be watched too, accordingly the number plate on the car will be detected. But it will be easier for the cameras to input the number plate if they change the number plates of the car.
In the last part of the text they tall about how the people In the future will be watched. They tell about that they will watch people trough banknotes. In this way, that they will put an aerial and a microchip in the banknotes, from were you will be watched?

2. There are both advantage and disadvantage by surveillance. The advantage could be that it will help the people. Because surveillance makes that some people feel them safe and protected. If there for example was a stealing in a business, is it easier to fin the guilty by means of cameras. Here is it an advantage to see how those people, who commit a crime are covered, and see out. In other words is it an advantage to protect the people/society against terror and crime. It is important that the people in the society are in certainty in their society and with that can go pleasant around.
But it could also be the reversed. Some people are against surveillance. They could feel them unpleasant and unwell in the society because of they constant feel oneself watched. The disadvantage is also that some people means that they have not a private life, because they always anywhere should feel them pursued. It is of course important that people feel them comfortable. They should feel that they have freedom without constant being watched around them. It a unpleasant feeling to go on the street and have that ulterior motive that someone watch you, and if you for example should run, will it maybe be misunderstood. If you are in a shop and will have you hands in your pockets, could it be a problem. Because it also will be misunderstood. All in all have surveillance both good and bad things, its different which situation it is.
 

En overfladisk rettelse:

1. The methods of surveillance which is mentioned in the text; Keeping 1984 in the Past” is among other things surveillance via cameras. In the text they talk about how they make use of the cameras. They make use of the cameras to hide them, so people can’t see them. Then they can pursue what is happing.
The other form of using surveillance is the internet. You will be watched from your own computer. It will be that your internet service could see what you do on the internet, even thought they couldn’t see you. Hereby the internet service could see which webpages you visit. The emails you send and receive will bee watched.
The third form of surveillance which is mentioned in the text is about communication. Through communication they watch the individual via telephone or mobile. Your conversations will be watched, in other words they watch what you talk about. Even the SMS – messages you send and receive will bee watched.
In the text they also talk about that your vehicle u. a will be watched too, accordingly the number plate on the car will be detected. But it will be easier for the cameras to record the number plate if they change the number plates of the car.
In the last part of the text they tall about how the people In the future will be watched. They tell about that they will watch people trough banknotes. In this way, that they will put an aerial and a microchip in the banknotes, from were you will be watched?

2. There are both advantages and disadvantages by surveillance. The advantage could be that it will help the people. Because surveillance makes (that) some people feel (them) safe and secure. If there for example was a robbery in a store, is it easier to find the guilty by means of cameras. Here is it an advantage to see how those people, who commit a crime are covered, and see out. In other words is it an advantage to protect the people/society against terror and crime. It is important that the people in the society are safe in their society and with that can go pleasant around.
But it could also be the reverse. Some people are against surveillance. They could feel (them) unpleasant and unwell in the society because of they constant feeling of being  watched. The disadvantage is also that some people means that they have no private life, because they always anywhere should feel them pursued. It is of course important that people feel (them) comfortable. They should feel that they have freedom without constantly being watched everywhere. It is an unpleasant feeling to go on the street and have that ulterior motive that someone is watching you, and if you for example should run, it maybe will be misunderstood. If you are in a shop and (will) have you hands in your pockets, it could be a problem. Because it also will be misunderstood. All in all surveillance have both good and bad things, its different which situation it is.