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7) The Indian Mutiny
Equipped for the future?
What does the business world look like in the future? What will the job profile of the future look like? In a recently American published book on the subject it is claimed that what is required in the 21th century is a ‘role’ and not a job. A Danish professor of economy agrees with this and defines the ‘role’ as a mixture of professional qualifications and personal qualities:
‘The employee’s personality plays an important role to the companies today.
(Du mangler at integrere "en stadig større" i sætningen) Not only must solid professional qualifications be possessed, compatibility with the culture of the company is also very important and employment must not only be for the sake of money.

Ang. "en stadig større" så er større vel en falsk komparativ og så må det det blive "still plays an important role"

Enig?

kan kun se at du har rette to ting i teksten...


Er der andre der kan se flere fejl/forbedringer ?

Den første sætning : "What does the business world look like in the future?" - den danske version lægger op til noget fremtidigt, og 'does look like' over for 'the future' er ikke for godt. Måske 'How will the business world look like in the future?' er bedre?

Nikolaj

Her er mit forslag til en rettet version. Rettelser angivet med stort - kommentarer i kantede parenteser. Jeg citerer:

"7) The Indian Mutiny
Equipped for the future?
What WILL the business world look like in the future? What will A FUTURE job profile look like? In a recently published AMERICAN [ligefrem ordstilling som på dansk] book on the subject it is claimed that what is required in the 21ST [Hov du! ikke 21th] century is a ‘role’ and not a job. A Danish professor of ECONOMICS [økonomi som studium] agrees with this and defines the ‘role’ as a mixture of professional qualifications and personal qualities:
‘The employee’s personality plays A STEADILY INCREASING role to the companies today.
YOU MUST not only POSSESS [jf. 'man' i den danske version] solid professional qualifications - FURTHERMORE IT IS OF UTMOST IMPORTANCE [jf.'uhyre vigtigt' i dansk version] THAT YOU ARE COMPATIBLE with the culture of the company [her ville jeg placere et komma eller en tankestreg, ellers får man nærmest vejrtrækningsproblemer :)] and APPLYING FOR A JOB SHOULD NOT only [el. 'entirely'] BE for the sake of money."

Den sidste sætning er meget vanskelig at få oversat, og det er bestemt ikke sikkert, at min version er den bedste. Man burde naturligvis have opdelt sætningen i den danske version.

Ellers en udmærket oversættelse efter min vurdering - og ingen kongruensfejl!

//Singularity

takker for rettelserne. Så skulle jeg godt kunne tillade mig at aflevere det :O)

Selvfølgelig er jeg stadig åben for flere rettelser el. forbedringer :)

ville det ikke lyde bedre med how will .... look in the future ?

#7: Tjo, enten a) eller b) herefter;

a) How will the business world look in the future?

b) What will the business world look like in the future?

//Singularity