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Hjælp til engelsk haster (Gramatiske fejl)
Hjælp til Gramatiske og stavefejl.
To get success in you life as a businessman. You must have the passion for it and you must love everything you do in the business world. To became a successful entrepreneur you should see,
that there is opportunity in everything and immediately get a good feeling inside that tells you what you need to do to take advantage of it before anybody else eve knowing it.
You have to see potential where others see disaster. When others think it can’t be done, entrepreneurs find at least half a dozen ways to get it done.
An entrepreneur is high on life, often hating the fact that they have to waste part of their life to sleep. They are the people who always seem to be thinking about business. Their passion shows in all they do and they rarely lack energy when it comes to following up on a new idea. Too became a successful businessman/entrepreneur you Have to have a lot of Confidence in Yourself and you must be willing to make Sacrifices. I think Tony Deep is a typical entrepreneur. Because he made noting to some thing, in that’s what to be entrepreneur is all abut. He sacrificed a lot to reach his goal. Leaved his home country to get her where he is now.
When I looking at him, I see him come up from nothing, now his living his dreams. He deserve to be rich.
Svar #1
27. august 2009 af EBBefar (Slettet)
Förste punktum skal være et komma, ellers giver det ikke meget mening.
"To became s successful..." skal være "to become". I det hele taget er den sætning noget "u-engelsk". Jeg går ud fra at det er en oversættelse? upload evt originalen. Eller (hvis det passer nogenlunde med originalen) pröv med noget lignende: "To become a successful entrepreneur you should realise, that there is opportunity in everything". Og "good feeling inside" burde nok ændres til "gut feeling" i en eller anden form, hvis den danske version lyder på noget med mavefornemmelse. Du mangler i övrigt et r i ever.
Became/become fejlen er der igen i linie 9.
Hvorfor store bogstaver i "have", "confidence", "yourself" og "sacrifices" i linie 10 og 11?
I linie 11 har du glemt h i nothing og det sidste "in" skal være "and". Og er du sikker på at du ikke hellere vil have komma för because?
Leaved i linie 12 skal være Left
Svar #3
27. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)
EBBefar,
Du burde være sikker i dit engelske hvis du vil hjælpe andre. Der er aldrig komma før "because"
Raul G,
Hvorfor afbryder du pludselig den første sætning med et punktum efter "businessman" ?? -du kan da ikke fortsætte med en bisætning efter et punktum !!
Hvis man skulle hjælpe dig med at rette din tekst, skulle man skrive den helt om.
Svar #4
29. august 2009 af Meandmy1 (Slettet)
skulle man skrive den helt om.????? Hvad mener du er der meget fejl i den ??????? :/
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