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Lille engelsk tekst - rettelse
Hej alle sammen ;). Vil en af jer lige se om jeg har nogle fejl i en kort engelsktekst, så er i flinke ;)
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Mareridt
Jeg havde boet i London i nogen tid, men i mit kvarter var der stadig mange gader, hvor jeg ikke havde været. En aften skete der noget forfærdeligt. Jeg var gået ud sent. Efter en halv time opdagede jeg pludselig, at jeg var faret vild. Den berømte London tåge havde overrasket mig. Jeg vandrede rundt i en time, og jeg havde næsten opgivet håbet om at finde hjem. Så dukkede en herre op og tilbød at hjælpe mig. Han kaldte sig Jack The Ripper. Hvor havde jeg hørt det navn før? Pludselig huskede jeg:
mange kvinder var forsvundet i de sidste måneder. Nogle var blevet fundet i Themsen; andre var aldrig dukket op. Der havde været mange artikler om ham i aviserne. Jeg ville skrive, men kunne ikke - og så vågnede jeg heldigvis.
Det jeg har skrevet:
Nightmare
I have lived in London for quite some time, but in my neighborhood there were still many streets, where I don’t have been. One night some terrible happened. I went out late. After half an hour I suddenly discovered, that I was got lost. The famous London fog had surprised me. I walked around for an hour, and I almost gave up all hope of finding home.
Then a man turned up, and offered to help me. He called himself Jack the Ripper. Where have I heard that name before? Suddenly I remembered: many women had disappeared the last months. Somebody was found in Themsen; others were never returned. There have been many articles about him in the newspapers. I would scream, but I couldn’t – and then I fortunately waked up.
Tak på forhånd ;)
Svar #1
29. september 2009 af stinne92 (Slettet)
jeg ville ikk sige have lived måske i had lived in london :)
Svar #2
29. september 2009 af Pulchrum (Slettet)
#1
jeg ville ikk sige have lived måske i had lived in london :)
Hmm meget muligt du har ret, synes også det lyder forfærdeligt :).
Svar #3
29. september 2009 af maiijs (Slettet)
Nightmare
I had lived in London for quite some time (Jeg ville skrive "for a while", men man kan sikkert også skrive det, du har skrevet.), but in my neighborhood there were still many streets, where I had not been. One night some terrible happened. I went out late. After half an hour I suddenly discovered, that I was lost. The famous London fog had surprised me. I walked around for an hour, and I had almost given up the hope of finding home.
Then a man showed up, and offered to help me. He called himself Jack the Ripper. Where had I heard that name before? Suddenly I remembered: many women had disappeared the last months. Some was found in Themsen; others had never returned. There had been many articles about him in the newspapers. I would scream, but I couldn’t – and then I fortunately woke up.
Jeg tror, at den er fejlfri, men lad endelig være med at skyde mig hvis den ikke er. ;)
Svar #4
29. september 2009 af Pulchrum (Slettet)
3#
Mange tak for hjælpen, selvfølgelig skyder jeg dig ikke, men takker dig for din hjælp ;)
Svar #5
29. september 2009 af stinne92 (Slettet)
her er nogle rettelser:)
I had lived in London for quite some time, but in my neighborhood, there were still many streets where I had not been.
After half an hour I suddenly realized that I was lost.
The famous London fog had surprised me.
I wandered around for an hour and I had almost given up hope of finding home.
. He called himself Jack the Ripper. Where had I heard that name before? Suddenly I remembered:
Some had been found in the Thames,
There had been many articles about him in newspapers. I would write, but could not .
Svar #6
29. september 2009 af Pulchrum (Slettet)
5# Hov min fejl, der skal ikke så "skrive" i slutninger - men skrige! :D
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