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14. oktober 2009 af wes2 - Niveau: 8. klasse

Opgaven lyder: Write about your greatest fear. What is it? how or why did it become your fear? can you do anything to stop fearing it? how does the human body and mind react when frightend? which physical processes take place?

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Fear assignment

I don’t think I really fear anything I can’t think of anything I fear. But I will bet there have been a lot of things I have been afraid of when I was child. Like going alone in the dark, and sleep in my own room with my door closed. But I guess those fears just have disappeared with the time.
Do you ever think about why people shake when they are about to face a big fear, or when they know something dangerous is about to happen? There is actually a reason: You get this rush, an adrenaline rush, it makes your body react more quickly, in a stressful situation, and it enhances your heartbeat, these things make your body shake. You have developed a specific fear by studying it, if you didn’t know nothing about your fear you had no reason to be afraid of it. I have been reading that some people might even pee in their pants, when they get scared. I guess it’s not the most common thing that would happen. I have not found a reason for why some people pee in their pants when they get scared, but my conjecture is that, all their focus is going to be at the fear, and their whole body just stops to perform, and that might stop the body from holding the ‘’pee’’ in. The most common fears: Heights, some people is afraid of heights. Spiders: alot of people is scared of Spiders it’s a very common fear, and it’s mostly girls who have that fear. This fear is not the most common fear but, some people are afraid of dying, I don’t think it makes any sense, we all going to die, we just don’t know when. Life is too short to be scared, just live your life.
 


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Svar #1
14. oktober 2009 af Nik_ (Slettet)

Orker ikke at rette indholdet, men har rettet grammatikken.

I don’t think I really fear anything, at least I can’t think of anything I fear. However, I’m sure there have been a lot of things I was afraid of when I was a child. Like going alone in the dark, and sleeping in my own room with my door closed. I guess those fears just have disappeared over time.
Do you ever think about why people shake when they are about to face a big fear, or when they know something dangerous is about to happen? There is actually a reason: You get this rush, an adrenaline rush, it makes your body react more quickly, in a stressful situation, and it enhances your heartbeat, these things make your body shake. You have developed a specific fear by studying it, if you didn’t know anything about your fear, you had no reason to be afraid of it. I have been reading that some people might even pee in their pants, when they get scared. I guess it’s not the most common thing that happens. I have not found a reason for why some people pee in their pants when they get scared, but my conjecture is that, all their focus is going to be focused on the fear, and their whole body just stops to perform, and that might stop the body from holding the pee in. The most common fears are: Heights, some people is afraid of heights. Spiders: alot of people are scared of spiders it’s a very common fear, and it’s mostly girls who have that fear. This fear is not the most common fear but, some people are afraid of dying, I don’t think it makes any sense, we’re all going to die, we just don’t know when. Life is too short to be scared, just live your life.


 


Svar #2
14. oktober 2009 af wes2

Tak!


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Svar #3
16. oktober 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Det var dog et utroligt stupidt stileemne at give nogen.......


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Svar #4
16. oktober 2009 af Nik_ (Slettet)

ja, men dem har vi vist alle sammen fået på et eller andet tidspunkt.. ^


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