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Walter Elias Disney

Walter Elias Disney also named Walt Disney was born on 5th December 1901 in Chicago. He studied at Kansas City

and Chicago Art Institute. Charlie Chaplin Walt Disney was very impressed. Since he loved to draw, he made himself

extremely inspired by Chaplin's comedy, so he tried to transfer it to his drawings. He had printed one of his drawings

and began as a young man in an advertising agency. He was totally bitten by doing commercials, and it was not long

before he founded a film company in Kansas City. He has some problems when he was repeatedly cheated by the film

companies would have little funny cartoons, but would not pay. After 10 years he had still had not success. He did not

give up so easily so he tried again and this time he was lucky. Legend has it that Walt Disney sat on the train on the

way to Hollywood, and he decided that his next drawing should be a mouse. Since the figure (figur) was signed should

it have a name. He thought that it should be called Mortimore Mouse, but when his wife Lillian better liked the name

Mickey Mouse he was baptized Mickey Mouse. Sound film had just been invented Speech, sound effects and music

could now be synchronized as closely to the moving images that it all melted together into one great experience. In the

third film there came sounds on and people flocked to New York to see the movie although it only lasted 7 minutes.
 

Mickey Mouse had become a superstar, and Walt Disney studio may extend him and boost production. Mickey Mouse

was now known throughout the world. In 1930 Walt Disney launched the first cartoon in color "Flowers and Trees", and

already in 1933 could "The Three Little Pigs" appears in theaters. It was one of the biggest hits. Walter Elias Disney

draw many new figures. After Mickey came Goofy, Donald Duck and Pluto. They were all equally popular as Mickey

Mouse. was actually even more loved, especially in Europe. In 1935 Walt Disney put his people to start the production

of "Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs". It was the first feature-length films. Shortly afterwards, was also "Pinocchio,"

"Fantasia," "Bambi" and "Dumbo" made. Movies that are still being sold in stores today. When Walt Disney died in

1966, his studio has become so established that no one dreamed of closing it down. there are very few cartoonists

who have met Walt Disney,but we will all remember him in his amazing movies