Rettelse af en meget lille engelsk opgave

Hm, nu ved jeg ikke hvorfor du skriver i datid, jeg ville nok foretrække at skrive det i nutid, ellers er der nogle småfejl:

"I woke up because I had to go to school. When I came to the school, I met all my friends. In our first two lessons, which were Biology, we saw a movie. Later we had Danish in two lessons, where we made a gramah(?) paper. After this we had math, where we got back our assignments. The last time we had English, it was very fun.

Me and my friend were together after school and we went to the center, to buy a gift for my mother, since it's her birthday."

Håber du kan bruge noget af det :-)

Hilsen Christoffer

Monday

I woke up, because I should in¹ had to go to school. When I came over got to the school, I saw² all my friends. In the first two lessons, we had biology where we saw a movie. Later, we had danish for two danish lessons. We made grammar paper³. After this, we had math, and we got back our assignments. get our(afleveringsopgaver) back. The last time we had english The last lesson of the day was english, and it was fun.⁴

Later,  me and my friend were together I was together with my friend. We take at the center, because I should bying a gift to my mother We went to the mall because I had to buy my mother a present. It's her birthday tomorrow.
 

1. should in - er en direkte oversættelse fra dansk (skulle i).. pas på med det.

2. overvej om det egentlig er det du mener. Når du skriver "saw all my friends" mener du faktisk at du bare så dem... hvis du mødtes med dem der, kunne du evt istedet skrive "I met up with all my friends"

3. Den her sætning bliver du helt nødt til at ændre. Jeg ved ikke rigtig hvad du mener med dem. Regner med det er nogle grammatik opgaver, men så bliver du nødt til at uddybe det lidt.
Det engelske ord for grammatik er grammar.

4. Var det, det du mente?

Det er ikke alt jeg har rettet som jeg har streget ud. Du har en del stavefejl og danismer.

Håber du kunne bruge min hjælp.

 English (med stort "E")  -   Danish  (med stort "D")

Dansk "skulle i skole" er futurisk og må hedde  "was going to school"

"...and we got  our assignments back"

Later  my friend  and I spent some time together

We (take) went (at)  to the (center) centre(,) because I (should bying) had to buy  a (gift)  present  (to) for my mother,

A L D R I G    komma foran "because"

"mødte"  =  "met"

"met up with"  =  "mødte efter aftale"

"In the first two lessons"

"When I got there..."

 "Tomorrow is my mother's birthday"