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hej, nogle eller en som vil være sød og hjælpe mig med at rette de sidste fejl.
da jeg synes det er svært at se sine egne fejl. (:
One of the reasons why Americans feel that they need a gun is that people in the USA feel insecure: they need something which can help them to protect their family against criminals, burglars, etc. They feel exposed if they do not have something which they can help them to protect their family.
Altogether they do not know any better; Americans live(s) in a very violent society, were almost everybody has a gun and because of that, people are afraid for everything, this is something they have to do something about. I’m sure the fear will decrease if the law is stricter. I’m also 100% sure that the death figures will decline, if there was no one who owned a gun, of course other than the police and the military.
I do not understand why they have stricter laws if you’re stealing something or are violent to anybody than shooting somebody? It does not make sense.
I think America is a very insecure society compared to your society.
tusind mange tak på forhånd (:
Svar #1
05. november 2009 af dealing_diamond (Slettet)
One of the reasons why Americans feel that they need a gun, is that people in the USA feel insecure. They need something which that can help them to protect their family against criminals, burglars, etc. They feel exposed if they do not have something which they that can help them to protect their family.
Altogether all in all, they do not know any better. Americans live in a very violent society where almost everybody has owns a gun, and because of that, people are afraid for scared of everything. This is something they have need to do something about. I’m sure the fear will decrease if the law is stricter people wouldn't be so afraid if the law was more strict. I’m also 100% sure that the (death figures will decline)1, if there was no one who owned a gun, of course other than noone other than the police and the military owned a gun/weapon.
I do not understand why they have stricter laws if you’re against stealing something or are violent to anybody or violence than shooting someonebody? It does not make sense.
I think America is a very insecure society compared to (your)2 society
1: du bliver nødt til at forklare hvad du mener...
2: Hvis samfund snakker du om? Danmarks?
Svar #2
05. november 2009 af Bardhil (Slettet)
Nogle fejl jeg kunne få øje på:
1. "Have something which they can..."
Denne sætning lyder en smule forkert. Du burde bruge that i stedet for.
2. "People are afraid for,"
Forkert præposition. Det skal være "of "istedet for "for".
3. Det vil lyde bedre med "besides the police and the military".
Derudover giver: "death figures..." ingen mening.
Det gør: "I think America..." heller ikke. Hvilket samfund samligner du Americas med? Danmarks?
Svar #3
05. november 2009 af Stygotius
1. Der er ingen grund til at rette "which" og forlange "that" i stedet.
2. Procent skrives normalt på engelsk "per cent"; procenttegnet bruges mest i tabeller og videnskabelige sammenhænge.
3. Komparativ af "strict" er "stricter", .-ikke "more strict"
4. "One of the reasons why Americans........" er helt i orden
5. Der er ingen grund til at stryge "that" efter "feel"
6. "can help them to protect" er helt i orden
7. "they do not know any better" er helt i orden.
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