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Hej :)
jeg håber der er nogle som vil hjælpe mig, er meget dårlig til at formulere mig og lave korrekt ordstilling når jeg laver skriftlig engelsk. Når jeg skriver bliver det meget dansk at høre på, så derfor håber jeg at nogle kan hjælpe mig så jeg lære at se mine fejl. på forhånd tak for hjælpen
Beware the dog
a letter to peter´s friends
Dear everybody
I think it is my duty to inform you about what happened. I hope everybody is alright on the station. I have been an accident, I was injured after a dogfight, and I tried to fly the Spitfire home, but I was badly wounded. I had lost my leg below the knee, but I had no pain. I began to feel me light-headed, and I decided to bail out of the Spitfire. When I woke up, I was on in a hospital. My injuries treated, and they told me I was I Brighton. But there was something wrong on the hospital. The water was hard, but I remember from my schooldays that water in Brighton is soft. I could also hear the sound of Junker´s 88 flying around in the air. I thought it couldn´t be true, you know the German planes didn´t last long before it will be shot down in England. I find it strange. So I decided to sneak me out of the bed over to the window. – Now would I know where I was. I saw a sign were there stood Garde Au Chien – Beware the dog on English. Now I understood it all better. I was I France and I was sure I was taken as prisoner of the war. I fought myself back to the bed, and shortly after this, the nurse tells me that someone from Royal Air Force, was here and they would like to talk with me. I know it was a trap, they had taken me as prisoner of the war. You should know, I don´t gave them some information about Royal Air Force. I only gave them my name, rank and number. You should know that no matter how much I am being blackmailed, I will not tell some of our secret information and strategies. It would be my pride to defend the Royal Air Force, and i´m ready to sacrifice for you and our country. You should know you matters a great deal to me, and I will never forget you. – Know what happens! You need to know, you making me proud to fight for our country, and I hope the best for you further in the future.
Many greetings from
Peter
PS. Please make me proud! I will do the same for you.
Svar #1
11. november 2009 af exatb
I think it is my duty to inform you about what happened. I hope everybody is allright on at the station. I have been into an accident, I was injured after during a dogfight, and I tried to fly the Spitfire home, but I was badly wounded. I had lost my leg below the knee, but I had no pain. I was beginning began to feel me light-headed, and I decided to bail out of the Spitfire. When I woke up, I was on in a hospital. My injuries were treated, and they told me I was in Brighton. But there was something wrong on at the hospital. The water was hard, but I remember from my schooldays that water in Brighton is soft. I could also hear the sound of Junker´s 88 flying around in the air. I thought it couldn´t be true; you know the German planes didn´t last long before it will be they were shot down in England. I find it It seemed strange to me. So I decided to sneak me out of the bed and over to the window. – Now would I know I knew where I was. I saw a sign were there stood which said: "Garde Au Chien" – "Beware the dog" on in English. Now I understood it all better. I was I France and I was sure I was taken as now prisoner of the war. I fought myself struggled to get back to the bed, and shortly after this that, the nurse tells told me that someone from Royal Air Force, was here and they would like to talk with me. I know knew it was a trap, they had taken me as prisoner of the war. You should know, I don´t gave didn´t give them some any information about Royal Air Force. I only gave them my name, rank and number. You should know that no matter how much I am being blackmailed, I will not tell some any of our secret information and strategies. It would be my pride to defend the Royal Air Force, and i´m ready to make sacrifices for you and our country. You should know you matters mean a great deal to me, and I will never forget you. – Know what happens! You need to know, you make making me proud to of fighting for our country, and I hope the best for you further in the future.
Many greetings from
Peter
PS. Please make me proud! I will do the same for you
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