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Se mine forslag i kursiv.

The shop assistant, who she had not seen before, gave her much information. (el. Many informations? )
The shop assistant whom she had not seen before, gave her much information.

The two brothers lived under the same roof their lives. (life fordi det er ik flere liv? Men de har jo også kun et liv. Er lidt i tvivl her.)
The two brothers lived under the same roof all their life.
 

The town has a historically (historical) district which after my opinion is worth seeing.
The town has a historical district which in my opinion is worth seeing.

He looked at me with tearful eyes. (den rigtigte sætning er: He looked at me with tearfully eyes)
He looked at me with tearful eyes.

I love nature and being outside. (den rigtige sætning: I love the nature and being outside)
I love nature and being outside.

It really gives me the shivers to think of what/ (how?) we humans may do to each other.
It really gives me the shivers to think of what we humans may do to each other.

The police do not discover that he has no driving licence. Eller. The police do not discover that he do not has driving licence. Eller …. Do not has a driver’s licence.
The police did not discover that he did not have a drivers licence.

He was about to wash the car, as/when it began to rain. (på dansk: han var i gang med at vaske bilen, da det begyndte at regne)
He was about to wash the car when it started to rain.

Will they actually sell their house? / do they actually want to sell their house? (på dansk: vil de rent faktisk sælge deres hus?
Are they actually going to sell their house?