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15. juni 2010 af madas (Slettet) - Niveau: 9. klasse

 
Hej jeg har virkelig brug for hjælp til min engelsk håber nogle der ude der vil hjælpe min engelsk fordi jeg er selv rigtig  dårlig til engelsk og jeg håbe bare på nogle af jer der vil rette min engelsk.

1. Jack the Ripper is a never-apprehended serial killer in London that killed his victims in the last half of the 1888th Jack the Ripper is the most famous serial killer in 1888 century. The name comes from a letter sent to London Central Agency of a person who was called eb. It claims to be the killer police found uf the five victims were all prostitutes.
 

2. Whom he killed and why?
The police found out he might have killed the people here and all women were prostitutes
The first person named

Mary Ann Nichols kill 31. August in 1888
Killed a Friday. Her neck was broken by two pieces, the lower abdomen was partially torn by a deep open from deep, jagged wounds. It was also several sections running across the abdomen.
 

2. Annie Chapman kill 8. September in 1888
She was killed one Saturday her neck was broken by two pieces of her abdomen was sliced wide open. It was later discovered that the uterus had been removed.
 

3. Elisabeth Strides - kill 15. September in 1888
were killed one Sunday. There was a clear cut on the neck. She lost lots of blood.

4 Catherine Eddowes kill 30 september in 1888
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Was also killed one Sunday. She was sliced over his neck like the two other victims. The abdomen was ripped open by long and deep. Jagged wound. The left kidney and the largest part of the uterus.
 

Mary Kelly - kill 9 november in 1888
.Killed a Friday. Her neck had been broken down to her back and her abdomen almost emptied of its organs. Her heart was missing.

It is believed that Jack the Ripper person he walked over to a prostitutes. But she will not go to bed with him and so she became angry and called the police and catch him and took him. He was so angry that he killed her and he said that he would kill all prostitutes.

3. Was jack the ripper ever found.
He was never found but they had some suspects to some people who could be Jack the Ripper but the only thing you got to know about the killer was from the letters sent to police it was me who did it says in the letters.

Jeg håber bare på nogle flinke mennesker der vil rette min engelsk fordi jeg er selv rigtig dårlig til at skrive engelsk og har svært ved selv at rette mit engelsk. jeg håber i kan gøre det godt og rette min engelsk og jeg ved godt det er rigtig dårligt skrevet.
 


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Svar #1
16. juni 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

Det er i det væsentlige den samme opgave, som du startede lidt tidligere her

https://www.studieportalen.dk/Forums/Thread.aspx?id=866284

og hvor du også har givet dit danske forlæg. Det danske er imidlertid vanskeligt at finde mening i flere steder, og det gør det særdeles vanskeligt at rette det engelske til korrekt engelsk.

I øvrigt halter kalenderen en lille smule. Aug 31, 1888 var ganske rigtigt en fredag, og Sep 8, 1888 var en lørdag, men 7 dage senere, Sep 15, 1888, var det igen en lørdag og ikke en søndag, som påstået. Sep 30, 1888 var det som påstået søndag, og Nov 9, 1888 var en fredag. Men hvorfor er det vigtigt at anføre, hvilken ugedag ofrene blev dræbt på?


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Svar #2
16. juni 2010 af sannand (Slettet)

1. Jack the Ripper was a serial killer in London, who operated in the largely impoverished districts in and around the Whitechapel during the late years of the 19th century. He is one of the most famous serial killers in his epoch, and his pseudonym derives from a letter sent to the London Central Agency, signed by a person claiming to be the killer. It is assumed, that five prostitutes found murdered in London were all victims of Jack the Ripper.

2. Whom did he kill and why?

Since the murderer was never found, the police only assumed these five murdered women to be the victims of Jack the Ripper.

The first victim was named Mary Ann Nichols and was killed on August 30th, 1888.
She was killed on a Friday, and her neck was broken into two pieces, the lower abdomen was partially torn by a deep, jagged wound. It was also several sections running across the abdomen.

The second victim was Annie Chapman, killed on September 8th, 1888.
She was killed on a Saturday, and similar to the woman before her, her neck was also broken into two pieces and her abdomen was cut wide open. It was later discovered that her uterus had been removed.

The third victim was Elisabeth Strides. She was murdered on September 15th, 1888.
She was killed on a Sunday. There was a clear cut on the neck, and her death was caused by loss of blood.

The forth victim was Catherine Eddowes, murdered on September 30th, 1888.
She as well was killed on a Sunday. Like with two of the other victims, also her neck was broken. The abdomen was ripped open by long and deep wounds. The left kidney and the largest part of the uterus had also been removed from her body.

The last victim was Mary Kelly, killed on November 9th, 1888.
She was killed on a Friday. Her neck had been broken down to her back and her abdomen had almost been emptied of its organs. Even her heart was missing.

It is believed, that Jack the Ripper once approached a prostitutes in person. Since she refused to go to bed with him, she became angry and called the police wanting to get him arrested. He became so angry, that he killed her and declared that his intentions were to kill all prostitutes.

3. Was Jack the Ripper ever found?

Jack the Ripper was never found, although the police had some suspects. The only thing uncovered of the serial killer was a letter sent to the police saying "It was me, who did it" and signed with the now infamous pseudonym "Jack the Ripper".


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