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 du sender den bare i tekst til min indbakke . så viser jeg dig hvor der er fejl. :-)

Har lige sendt den :) tak tak!!

I have seen your announce in the local paper, and I would like a sommerjob before school start. I am very interested at the job hotel working and babysitting

My name is Sumeyra and I am 15 years old, but I am turning 16 in October . I leave 9. class this summer. I start in high school, after summer vacation, so I will earn some money and try something new. I think it will be exciting to visit USA and work in a hotel.
I live with my dad, mom and my little sister in a little town, Horsens. I am originally from Turkey, but I am born and growed up in Denmark. In my spare time, I spend time with my friends , family, makes homework, I play football, sometimes I am babysitter for my nephew and I work in a shop with name Jysk. Jysk is a shop, where we sell pillows and expensive duvet etc.
The school is very important for me, I have a goal and that is, to be a psychologist once.
I have before been babysitter for my old neighbors kids in 3 years, so I have experience with children. As I have told, I have a spare time job, and I clean , some times help customes who need help.
About my self can I tell , that I am a very responsible , social and helpful person. I will do my best if I get the job. I am really open, to try new things and to challenge my self. I think I have what the job need . I have experience to play with kids, and take care of them, because I before had trying that.
I really want the job, and think I am suitable for it. I don't think, the communication will bee a problem for me.
I really hope, I hear from you

Yours sincerely : Sumeyra Sahin

Du kan bare sende den tilbage til min indbakke :) og tusind tak for hjælpen!! ;)

 Teksten i # 3 er ikke engelsk, men amerikansk, og der skal fjernes en del kommaer.