En lille rettelse :( .. føler der er mange fejl

 This short story ’’abduction’’ is published in Comma, 2002 and written by Shelagh Delaney.

The story is about a woman called Ann and her family. They lived in Manchester, until she found a job in a child hospital in London and leaved home. When she settled in Kensington, she kidnapped her sixteen years old brother as he left school. He began to live with her and she gave him everything what he wanted and more than that. She raised him and finds him a job, and one day he finds a girlfriend and she becomes pregnant. Even though the sister insist that the girl gets an abortion, the couple still gets married and wants the child. As time passes the brother begins to drink, and the girl kicks him out because he is never sober and she doesn’t want him near the child. He is an alcoholic and his sister doesn’t believe the words from the wife, because she has always been so overprotected facing the brother. The sister keeps giving him money, and he keeps spending the money on alcohol. While the brother is drinking he thinks about his memories with his family and thats the day he dies.

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