kan en rette min engelsk opgave det er til imorgen .

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My name is Anne . I am 26 years old. Is I am married and has I have two children. I've been the head of Tesco for 3 years. My house is located 10 km away from Tesco. I'll tell everything I've seen since about the robbery that happened in Tesco. It was a lovely morning when I went to Tesco. On the way to Tesco, I saw a white car which it had also been parked in front of Tesco yesterday the day before. When I walked into my office, I saw that security guards levered were delivering money to for the cash machines in front of the store. Where Bell (klokken?) It was eighth 8:05 am. and Where all the people everybody were happy, but then came a number of offenders came in wearing balaclavas (ski masks) and wielding?? and with weapons and attacked one of the guards before stealing a canister of cash and making off in a silver Volkswagen Golf.
Mon?? I think it was something with there were about 5 people. Since and the attacks attackers were all had wearing balaclavas on.
After the they attack attacked the guards, so it they came into Tesco. where all the customers and employees were very scared and one of the customers were was a very old woman when she who got a very high blood pressure. However, since when everything it all happened, I was in my office. Where Then I heard that customers screamed screaming, So looked and I went to see what was going on and when I looked, I could see that a number of offenders wearing balaclavas and wielding?? and with weapons and who had attacked one of the guards .. When I saw all this I was very scared and if(vidste??) I did not know what I would to do endtil(dette er end ikke dansk) until one of the customers yelled that can not be one of us???? to call the police also(og så?) skundte and then I quickly phoned Northamptonshire Police and fortællte(dette er heller ikke dansk) reported that a number of offenders wearing elethuer(elefanthuer??) ski masks and wielding?? with weapons and had attack attacked one of the guards out in here at Tesco,  and it is that there were about 5 people with wearing balaclavas on and that everyone had weapons. Then it they said that they are would be here in about 10 minutes. And after 10 minutes later came in such the Northamptonshire police arrived and saved our life. All the customers and staff were very frightened and some of them went to the hospital because they were not good feeling well. And I was one of those who were very scared. One is now home and doing well. Thanks for everything.
 

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My name is Anne . I am 26 years old. Is I am married and has I have two children. I've been the head of Tesco for 3 years. My house is located 10 km away from Tesco. I'll tell everything I've seen since aboutthe robbery that happened  took place in Tesco. It was a lovely morning when I went to Tesco. On the way to Tesco my way (,) I saw a white car which it had also been parked in front of Tesco yesterday the day before. When I walked into my office(,) I saw that security guards levered were delivering money to for the cash machines in front of the store. Where Bell (klokken?) It was eighth 8:05 am. and Where all the people everybody were  was happy, but then came a number of offenders came in wearing balaclavas (ski masks) and wielding?? and with weapons and attacked one of the guards before stealing a canister of  ?????  cash and making off in a silver Volkswagen Golf.
Mon?? I think it was something with there were about 5 people. Since and the attacks attackers were allhad wearing balaclavas on. 
After the they attack attacked the guards, so it they came into Tesco. where all the customers and employees were very scared and one of the customers were was a very old woman when she who got avery high blood pressure almost had a heart attack.. However, since when everything it all happened, I was in my office. Where Then I heard that customers screamed screaming, So looked and I went to see what was going on and when I looked, I could see that that a number of offenders  ?????  wearing balaclavas and wielding??  and with wielding their weapons andwho had attacked one of the guards .. When I saw During all this I was very scared frightened and if(vidste??) I did not knowwhat I would to do endtil(dette er end ikke dansk) until one of the customers yelled that can not be one of us???? to call the police also(og så?) skundte and then I quickly phoned Northamptonshire Police andfortællte(dette er heller ikke dansk) reported that a number of offenders  wearing elethuer(elefanthuer??)ski masks and wielding?? with weapons waving guns and had attack attacked one of the guards out in here at Tesco, and it is that there were about 5 people with wearing balaclavas on and that everyone had weapons. Thenit they said that they are would be here in about 10 minutes. And after 10 minutes later came in such theNorthamptonshire police arrived and saved our life lives. All the customers and staff were very frightened and some of them went to the hospital because they were not good feeling well. And I was one of those who were very scared. One is now home and doing well. Thanks for everything.

 "offenders "   går ikke her. Der menes formodentlig "bad guys" eller "suspicious characters"

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