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Mvh. Camilla

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 undskyld, hvad mener du? Jeppe101

Bare at der ingen grund er til at sende din fil, når du har vedhæftet den:-) Kan være at Camilla ikke ved, at man kan det.

 Nååh, tak Jeppe :) Nej, det vidste jeg ikke før nu.

Nu har jeg kigget hurtigt på din stil. - husk at når man skriver "jeg" på engelsk, skriver man altsid "I" med STORT I .. Desuden skal du altså passe på med at gå for hurtigt frem, da der er en del "småfejl" som stavekontrol 100 % vil fange, hvis du altså har det på dit program. Derudover skal du også huske, at når du mener noget, hedder det "I think" og ikke "I mean", da mean egentlig betyder "betyder".. Men det er ganske små fejl, som du nok godt også selv bemærker, hvis du tjekker det godt igennem. Ellers god stil ^^

”The devil wears Prada” Film review.

Andy (Anne Hathaway) moves to New York in hope of becoming a journalist, and her career break can possibly be her working for “Runway” which is the ultimate fashion magazine in the world.
She became a second assistant for Miranda Priestly (Meryl Streep) who is the editor-in-chief of “Runway”.
Andy has no interest in fashion and on the other hand Miranda’s first assistant Emily, doesn’t like Andy. At first Miranda thinks that Andy is fat, smart, different, somebody for her to groom.
Nigel gives Andy an offer. Nigel will help her transform into something Miranda could take more seriously at work.
Before she knows it, she is like a clone of Miranda.

My opinion of the movie is that I like it’s about a random girl, who is not very pretty but on the other hand very smart, she gets a job at a place, where only models and all the fashion pro’s, are working.
I like it because it gives a feeling to every woman that if you want to do something, then just do it, don’t let your ugliness stop whatever you want do.
I can’t see any negative things in the movie, maybe because it’s one of my favorite movies.
The characters in the movie are very different from each other.
Andy is the quiet and shy girl and wears clothes that she feels comfortable with.
Andy is the clever and smart girl, who does not have any sense of fashion.
Miranda is the editor-in-chief on “Runway”, she is very fashion conscious and she is very fixated on her look.
She is the more serious and tough type, she is a perfectionist; everything must go after her head. My favorite character in the movie is Nate. Nate is Andy’s boyfriend, and he is just so sweet, and patient. He knows when to talk and when to shut up.
I just think that if he were my boyfriend I’d be super happy!
In the movie, it is very clear to see, that Nate loves Andy very much, but he gives up at a point because she did not feel the same about him.
This was my little review of”The devil wears Prada” which is one of my favorite films. Out of 6 stars, I’ll give the movie 5 stars, the reason that I didn’t gave the movie 6 stars out of 6 is because the only movie I would give so much credit is ”A world outside” therefore 5 stars out of 6 is a very good score.

Emilie Skovfoged Ensbye 1.k CG
 

 Hej du (: mange tak! undskyld er det den rettede eller min stil?

Den rettede ;)