ENGELSK STIL! nogle som se om der er nogle fejl i den! plllzzz!!!

har gjort mit bedste, men om der er nogle søde folk der lige vil se om der er nogle fejl?? det ville være en STOR hjælp! på fooorhånd taaak! :-*

This is our house, we moved in here after three months when we lived in a telt. Life in a tent was hard when it rained, all our stuff wet when we had to sleep, even though it was wet. This house we moved into is much better. The house we live in now is much better than the telt we lived at before. The house is not exactly a castle, but for us it is a castle. It will not be so very wet, because our new house has a (et tag?), but it is very cold. Our door does not close properly, it was broken from the first day, so when it is windy, we freeze a lot.
Every morning my brother and I going to work. We works at. 07:00 to 17:30. It's not a perfect work, but we get money for it. We pick up (skrald?) from the streets so the streets do not look dirty like. At work we get only a piece of dry bread with a little warm water. My brother can not see with his one eye, one f the rich boys were throwing stones when he was hit in the eye. But he is strong enough to cope.
After work, we are very trææte, and it takes an hour to go home, everyday we are at home. 18:00. My brother and I earn $ 1 each, for some it is very little but for us it a lot. The money we earn, we give them to my mother when we get home. My mother works for the rich, where she will make their house clean, but even the wealthy have money, they give her very little. The money we serve together, we will get food and clothes for ourselves.
For supper we have bread with cheese and tea, which comes sugar in. It only sometimes when we can afford some meat, maybe every other month. At home we have no dining table or chairs we can sit on. We are all sitting around and eating our food. When all three of us are asleep, we have only one large quilt, but we still freezes, though we have many clothes on.
Back then I lived went my brother and I were in school. At school we were mobbed with our style of dress, and they said all along that was dirty. We were kicked out of school, they said we will not come to anything. My father died of lung power. He smoked a lot and was never home. He did not think of his children or wife. Sometimes he had no money, he hit my mother. We also had a little sister, but she died of starvation, she was only five years old. We are very poor, but we are not ungrateful, we thank God for everything He gives us. We are (tilfredse?) with the money we earn, and (tilfredse?) with our food.

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