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"The notebook" - min mening
Hello guys
Er der nogen, der vil se om jeg har fejl i teksten?
The plot in the movie was good and beautiful, because it was about to persons who loved each other and split up, but they ending with to be together again and are together to they die.
The main characters, Noah and Allie, are really sweet couple. Ryan (Noah) and Rachel (Allie) played their roles really good.
I didn’t really like Allie’s parents, because they wouldn’t have Allie to be with Noah, I especially didn’t like Allie’s mother, because she hid the letters from Allie and nearly spoiled the relationship between Noah and Allie.
When Allie was engaged with a man, she slept with Noah, and I think it was stupid that she did it and even worse that she said that she still will be with her fiancé.
It was a stupid thing Allie did, but I think the movie ends well, because Allie chose Noah.
Og noget andet, vil gerne skrive mere, men ved bare ikke hvad jeg skal skrive, så hvad kan jeg ellers skrive om?
Svar #2
31. marts 2011 af IsaacN (Slettet)
Du skal i hvert fald lige rette "it was about to persons" til "it was about two persons".
Og "but they ending with to be together again" er direkte oversat :P
Jeg ville skrive "but they end up being together again and stay together till death do them apart" (kender ikke historien, det sidste vil kun give mening hvis én af dem dør).
linje 3: "Noah and Allie, are really sweet coupe", mangler "a" mellem are og really, og jeg ville droppe really eller skrive very istedet, "Noah and Allie, are a (very) sweet couple".
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Er ikke lige den skarpeste kniv når det kommer til engelsk, men lidt kan jeg jo hjælpe :)
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