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rettelse af kort opgave
22. marts 2008 af
NLJ (Slettet)
hej :)
jeg vil høre om nogen ville kigge min engelsk opgave igennem og rette lidt i den?
det er en lille oversættelse..
jeg vil høre om nogen ville kigge min engelsk opgave igennem og rette lidt i den?
det er en lille oversættelse..
Svar #2
22. marts 2008 af NLJ (Slettet)
Harold var godt sur. Hans cykeltur var gået helt i vasken! Han havde virkelig glædet sig til at prøve sin nye, røde cykel, og turen fra Birmingham til landsbyen Knowle, ti kilometer uden for Birminghams centrum, var gået vældig fint. Men cyklens forhjul lavede en mærkelig lyd. Han holdt fem minutters pause og var på vej hjem igen. Han kørte hurtigt rundt i bakkens skarpe sving, og i det samme faldt forhjulets møtrik af. Der lå han med næsen i asfaltens hårde, sorte overflade. Eller rettere, asfaltens farve var nu den samme som cyklens: blodrød. Han humpede ind til lægeklinikken, som lå ved bakkens fod, men klinikdamen sendte ham hjem i en taxa, da lægens konsultationstid var forbi for den dag. I taxaen havde han fået skæld ud af chaufføren, fordi hans næse dryppede blod på taxaens sæde, og fordi han ikke havde nok penge. ”jeg er ikke de fattiges hjælper,” havde manden sagt. ”jeg må tænke på konens nye frakke, ungernes vinterstøvler, hundens loppehalsbånd og det, jeg selv skylder på pubben.” Nu lå Harold hjemme i stuens sikkerhed, men han vidste, han ville være nød til at hugge son brors cykel for at køre til tandlægen. Højre fortands ene halvdel måtte ligge ved foden af Knowly-bakken!
Harold was pretty angry. His cycle ride was coming to nothing! He had really looked forward to try his new, red bike, and the trip from Birmingham to the village Knowle, ten kilometres outside Birmingham’s centre, had gone immensely fine. But the cycle’s front wheel made a strange sound. He halts a five-minute’s break and was going home again. He drove fast around the hill's sharp bend, and in the same the nut of the front wheel fell off. He lay there with the nose in the hard, black surface of the asphalt. Or more correctly, the asphalt’s colour was now the same colour as the bicycle’s; blood-red. He limped to the doctor, (that lay(ing) at the foot of the hill ?? ), but receptionist sent him home in a taxi, when the doctor's office hours was over for that day. In the taxi he just got scold of the driver, because his nose dripped blood on the taxi's seat, and because he didn't have enough money. "I am not the poor's helper", the man had said. "I must think of the wife's new coat, the children’s winter boots, the dog's flea collar and that, I myself owe at the pub. Now Harold lay at home in the living room's safety, but he knew, he'd be distress to steal his brother's bicycle in order to drive for the dentist. Right front tooth's one half had to lie at the foot of the Knowly-hill!
Harold was pretty angry. His cycle ride was coming to nothing! He had really looked forward to try his new, red bike, and the trip from Birmingham to the village Knowle, ten kilometres outside Birmingham’s centre, had gone immensely fine. But the cycle’s front wheel made a strange sound. He halts a five-minute’s break and was going home again. He drove fast around the hill's sharp bend, and in the same the nut of the front wheel fell off. He lay there with the nose in the hard, black surface of the asphalt. Or more correctly, the asphalt’s colour was now the same colour as the bicycle’s; blood-red. He limped to the doctor, (that lay(ing) at the foot of the hill ?? ), but receptionist sent him home in a taxi, when the doctor's office hours was over for that day. In the taxi he just got scold of the driver, because his nose dripped blood on the taxi's seat, and because he didn't have enough money. "I am not the poor's helper", the man had said. "I must think of the wife's new coat, the children’s winter boots, the dog's flea collar and that, I myself owe at the pub. Now Harold lay at home in the living room's safety, but he knew, he'd be distress to steal his brother's bicycle in order to drive for the dentist. Right front tooth's one half had to lie at the foot of the Knowly-hill!
Svar #3
22. marts 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)
Vender tilbage på den senere i aften, med mindre andre har tid til at hjælpe dig. Min ryg mangler lidt backup ;-) (læs: sofaen kalder)
Svar #5
24. marts 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)
- Han holdt fem minutters pause
Her skal over du oversætte som var det "Han havde en fem minutters..."
- He drove fast around the hill's sharp bend
sharp turn eller sharp curve, ikke bend
- and in the same the nut of the front wheel fell off.
and right there, the nut of...
- He lay there with the
There he was lying with the
- He limped to the doctor
He hoppled to the doctors office
- , som lå ved bakkens fod
, down at the foot of the hill
- "I am not the poor's helper",
.. poor peoples helper
- Nu lå Harold hjemme i...
Now Haroald was home lying in...
- Right front tooth's one half had to lie at the foot of the Knowly-hill!
The right front tooths half had to...
TanteOda
Her skal over du oversætte som var det "Han havde en fem minutters..."
- He drove fast around the hill's sharp bend
sharp turn eller sharp curve, ikke bend
- and in the same the nut of the front wheel fell off.
and right there, the nut of...
- He lay there with the
There he was lying with the
- He limped to the doctor
He hoppled to the doctors office
- , som lå ved bakkens fod
, down at the foot of the hill
- "I am not the poor's helper",
.. poor peoples helper
- Nu lå Harold hjemme i...
Now Haroald was home lying in...
- Right front tooth's one half had to lie at the foot of the Knowly-hill!
The right front tooths half had to...
TanteOda
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