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Routeburn Track, New Zealand

I cheeked the sky for signs of rain and set off early to make the most of the day. I had packed my bag with a few necessities a bite to eat, a bottle of water and heaps of curiosity about what the day will bring. I began my turn in the mountains, when the clock was 8:08. I walked down to a sea, near the place i come from. The sea was big, but the water was cold. So i I must be on my way. After i had seen the sea i come to a big cleft, i think it will be too dangerous to go over with a rope. But there was no way without. So i decided to test. I took my rope and bind it to my body, i saw a tree near me, and bind the rope to the tree, and began my dangerous turn. I was afraid off i will die now. Suddenly i heard a sound, it was the tree, it shaked, i said to myself, i can do it. And i come over the cleft after 5 minute. I saw the tree, it falls down to the ground. I think, it was a dangerous situation, and i hope it not wood happen again. On my trip further, i saw a bird, a big bird, i looked in my book about birds and saw it was a eagle. It is a beautiful animal, i said to myself. After it had gone one hour, i come to a post i had waiting for in a long time. On the post hang a letter, and in the letter a paper. On the paper stood, you are finish with the test to be in the mountains, and the traps on the way. Here is a diploma, and congratulation to you. I thinked i will have a photo on me, and the post, so i took my camera and put it on the stone. And the camera took a picture. I saw the picture and send it to my friend Sofie. After i was finish with the camera i walked over to a stone and begin to take my food, and drinks up from my bag. In the meantime i saw the beautiful view over a lake, and the big mountains. I think it was a moment i never wood forget. When i was done with my food i suddenly felt it was the best day in my life, and i had learned i will take care for the cleft next time, because i cut bin dead now.

But i will also visit the mountains again before i will die.