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09. maj kl. 13:42 af Lektiohelp - Niveau: 9. klasse
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Who is Bill Gates?

Bill Gates is one of the most well-known people in the world. Many of us know him as the co-founder and former CEO of Microsoft, but he is also an American programmer, entrepreneur, investor and philanthropist.
His full Name: William Henry Gates was born on October 28, 1955 in Seattle, Washington, whose parents were William H. and Mary Gates.
Bill Gates has been married to Mellinda Gates since 1994 (they may be divorced now in 2022?) Together they have three children: Jennifer Katharina, Phoebe Adele and Rory John.

When Bill Gates was at school as young, he really got bored very soon, he almost only played some board games and read a lot of fiction books - in fact he read the entire “World Book Encyclopedia" series during his teenage years. Bill Gates was sent to Lakeside Preparatory School at 13 years old, where he met his future business partner, Paul Allen. At the time when Bill Gates was young there didn’t exist computers etc. as today, so he found the computer fascinating where he wrote his first computer program on a General Electric computer, which was a version of tic-tac-toe. In 1973 which was 2 years before he started the software Company “Microsoft”, Bill Gates dropped out of college to pursue his business, “Microsoft”, with his partner Allen, which turned out to went from a little company, with two people working on scripts, to a very successful company, and today the largest PC company.
Bill Gates has invented a lot of things, but the most popular and breakthrough technologies he has invented are: Robot dexterity, New-wave nuclear power, Predicting preemies, Custom cancer vaccines and Xbox.

Bill Gates has been seen as a very smart man with a “big brain” but he is also seen as a very generous man, who helps where he can, and therefore he has been seen as a hero.
“Money has no utility to me beyond a certain point. Its utility is entirely in building an organization and getting the resources out to the poorest in the world.” It is what Bill Gates said, and therefore he and his wife, Melinda, have the Foundation “The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation”, which helps hospitals by founding hospitals, founding food for kids, and developing clean energy.
He has saved tens of millions of lives thanks to his foundation, who also uses Microsoft's technology to help hospitals. Not at least Bill Gates has also used his own money to fund hospitals in the US, and he plans by the time he has died to give away 95% of his total money to help people who need it.



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09. maj kl. 17:21 af Stygotius

Bill Gates is one of the (most well) best-known people in the world. Many of us know him as (the) co-founder and former CEO of Microsoft, but he is also an American programmer, entrepreneur, investor and philanthropist.
His full Name: William Henry Gates was born (His full name was not born on 28 Oct.) on October 28, 1955 in Seattle, Washington, whose parents were William H. and Mary Gates(W.H.Gates and M.Gates were not the parents of Bill Gates' full name.
Bill Gates has been married to Mellinda Gates since 1994 (they may be divorced now in 2022?) Together they have three children: Jennifer Katharina, Phoebe Adele and Rory John.

When Bill Gates was at school (as) when young, he really got bored very soon(,) and he almost only played (some) board games and read a (lot) number of fiction books - in fact he read the entire “World Book Encyclopedia" series during his teenage years. Bill Gates was sent to Lakeside Preparatory School at 13 (years old), where he met his future business partner, Paul Allen. At the time when Bill Gates was young (there didn’t exist) computers etc. didn't exist as they now do (today), so he found the computer fascinating where he wrote his first computer program on a General Electric computer, which was a version of tic-tac-toe. In 1973 which was 2 years before he started the software Company “Microsoft”, Bill Gates dropped out of college to pursue his business, “Microsoft”, with his partner Allen, (which) and it turned out to (went) go from being from a (little) small company, with two people working on scripts, to a very successful (company) one, and today it is the largest PC company in the world
Bill Gates has invented (a lot of) many things, but the most popular and breakthrough technologies he has invented are: Robot dexterity, New-wave nuclear power, Predicting preemies, Custom cancer vaccines and Xbox.

Bill Gates has been seen as a very (smart)  clever man with a “big brain” but he is also seen as a very generous man, who helps out where he can, and therefore he has been seen as a hero.
“Money (has no utility) is of no use to me beyond a certain point. Its (utility is) usefulness lies entirely in building an organization and getting the resources out to the poorest in the world.” (It) This is is what Bill Gates said, and therefore he and his wife, Melinda, have the Foundation “The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation”, which helps hospitals by founding hospitals, founding food for kids, and developing clean energy.  ???
He has saved tens of millions of lives thanks to his foundation, (who) which also uses Microsoft's technology to help hospitals. Not (at) least Bill Gates has also used his own money to fund hospitals in the US, and he plans (by the time he has died) when he dies to (give away) leave 95% of his (total money) entire fortune in order to help people (who need it) in need..

 


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