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 Is life better now than it was 100 years ago? 

    After my words yes … our life is 1000 times better and much easier now than it was 100 years ago. Technology: It is the Technology system, which has made our life much easier and quicker. Take for example Internet, computers and TVs. Our lives without those thing were so difficult and so boring in the past. But look how fare we are with the Internet development today. The Internet today helps us to get any kind of information we want, it helps us to stay connected with our friends and our family by using the social networks like Facebook.com, Hi5.com and MSN etc. there is a lot of stoff you can do in the Internet even order your food.    Computers… is it possible to avoid computers today? ’’No way’’  The computer is one of the most used modern technologies today. The main feature of the computer that we know today was established around the year 1945. The development of the computer are often categorized into generations. The first generation was machines based on radio tubes, and it was in the year 1945-55. The second generation was in 1955-65 and they were based on transistors. The third generation was the first minicomputers. Each time the computers became faster and faster. The computer has evolved so much,  that we do not know what the future will bring us.    TV: In old times a TV had only two dials, a volume control and a channel changer. But if you want a TV now you would probably look for something with extra add-ons and features as satellite receiver and a DVD player.     Thanks to the founder of  Technology !   

Det er lidt af en udfordring, det her. Selv om vi retter selve sprogbøfferne, er teksten stadigvæk rodet og pinligt intetsigende; der står en masse, og alligevel står der ingenting. Der mangler en klar disposition og rød tråd; du hopper lidt rundt mellem irrelevante tekniske fakta, flyvske spørgsmål som du ikke selv søger at besvare og endelig (langsøgte) påstande for hvilke du ikke argumenterer.

hah.. Undskyld mig, men er du på stoffer eller ? 

Jeg fik sgu da 7^ ... og min lærer sagde at jeg sagtens kunne gør det bedre næste gang.



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