We are bound for the promised land - rettelse (et kort stykke)

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Jeg har et lille stykke som jeg gerne vil have rettet, er der nogen der vil?

We are bound for the promised land
The story is written by A.E Watterson in 2007.
It’s about a girl called Eilean Macleod. She should be with her friends Lewis and Angus, but his father, don’t give her permission to go outside, because Eilean shall helps her mother with knitting. Eilean want to go, but the father hit her, because she doesn’t listen to him
She meet her friends, and they call her a chicken, because she didn’t met them.
Eilean’s and her family take to the church.

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