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03. maj 2011 af Rebecca01 (Slettet) - Niveau: C-niveau

Hej folkens , jeg håber nogen gider rette en engelsk tekst jeg skulle skrive på forhånd tak .

Ps. er ikke særlig god til engelsk

The text is a about a young boy which name is Nick, his father and his uncle, row a boat across a lake to am Indian camp. Nick’s father has been summoned to deliver a child for a woman who has ben in work for days. At the camp, they find the woman in a cabin lying on the bottom of a bed above, lies her husband with an injured foot. While Nick holds a basin, his father perfoms a Caesarian operation with a knife. After the baby’s delivery. Nick’s father saw that the woman’s husband has fatally slit his throat and killed himself, he was covered with blood.


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03. maj 2011 af over9000 (Slettet)

The text is a about a young boy which whose name is Nick, his father and his uncle, row a boat across a lake to am an Indian camp. Nick’s father has been summoned to deliver a child for a woman who has ben been in at work for days. At the camp, they find the woman in a cabin komma lying on the bottom of a bed* above, lies her husband with an injured foot. While Nick holds a basin**, his father perfoms a Caesarian operation with a knife. After the baby’s delivery. ikke oplagt med punktum her Nick’s father saw that the woman’s husband has fatally slit his throat and killed himself, he was covered with blood.

du springer lidt meget i tiderne, ved ikke om det er noget du bør være mere opmærksom på end du er?

*mangler punktum

**??

Det er en jævnt sær tekst du har skrevet dig her, hehe. d:


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03. maj 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

The text is a about a young boy which whose name is Nick,[period] His father and his uncle,[no comma] row a boat across a lake to am an Indian camp. Nick’s father has been summoned to deliver a child for a woman who has ben been in work labour for days. At the camp, they find the woman in a cabin lying on the bottom of a bed[period] Above, lies her husband is lying with an injured foot. While Nick holds a wash basin, his father perfoms a Caesarian operation section with a knife. After the baby’s delivery.[comma] Nick’s father saw that the woman’s husband has had fatally slit his throat and killed himself,[period] He was covered with blood.

[Kvinden har ikke været på arbejde i flere dage; hun har haft fødselsveer (labour) i flere dage].


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