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Almost eaten by a shark

On the beach some people saw a shark swim around a boy ( Geoff )who lay on his surfboard. They did everything could to get in touch with him- but it was obvious he was lying in his own thoughts, and not had seen the shark. Finally the boy Geoff felt something was wrong and then he discovered the big dangerous shark! He was very afraid and said that the time stood still. Even when he was frozen with fear he managed to puss his surfboard into the big dangerous shark when it was about to attack him. In last minut he escaped. Geoff couldnt understand what had happened to him and that he was still alive. People who were present at the beach when it all happened told us that they dig what they could to get in touch with Geoff. They shouted after him, but could not get in touch with him before he realized the shark. The people were very much in shock over no one had seen the shark before it almost was too late- even the lifeguard had seen the skark!There were other boys who were out shurfe at the same time as Geoff that they. Alexander saw it all! He claiming that he actually was quilty of Geoff not was eaten by the shark. Alexander threw namely his shufboard after the shark so Geoff could get away unharmed. Alexander was in shock but just glad no one was injuredWe interwiewed Geoff mom (Kate) and dad Tom, and ask how they felt about the whole situation. They said’’ We actually heard it on the radio, but all they said was that they dont know how Geoff had it since he had arrived at the hospital immediately for examination. So after they had said it on the radio we were very scared and feared the worst. We went to the hospital immediateley. In the Hospital we could not get to Geoff right away, so there we were so scared and thought we actually have lost our son. Fortunately it did not take long before Geoff came out and said he was OK. We were happy to see him safe and sound. Doctors from the Hospital confirm that Geoff was lucky to escape from the big dangerous shark, only with few scuffs. so we went home right away. We could not get Geoff to a interwiev unfortunately.