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I am very sorry when I seat in the rollstole and thinking about how powerful and courageous I was when I was young and popular for many kids when they sleep and love to listen to my stories but it is for many years ago. I always loved to fly through magic and wouldn´t never be older, because I want to be a hero for many children and show them that it never will be funny to be adult, because they can´t fly and play all the time they want. As a young boy, I have a gang her name was Wendy, she didn´t also want to be adult. But my rest gang was 5 boys who don´t have any parents. We lived in a little island called Neverland, we spendt our time with having fun to tease the pirates and crocodiles. I loved the Neverland because on that island you could never be adult. I am very tied of this world now when I look at this small window I can see the stars, the moon, the sky I fell that I am very lonely and isolated like the moon between all this stars when I look at the houses I can notice that there are any lights who are turn at the houses and it can tell me how many parents read fairy tales to there children. It make me be more tied and worried, because I can see that, children are busy with the tecnologi and they well no more spendt their time with read fairy tales. But it is their parents responsibility to make the children be more dependent to fairy tales. Why I set her begin when I decide to leave Neverland and start my life as a adult boy who can take consequence when it come but I didn´t feel how fast the time go her on the earth, I have my eyeglasses beside me, because I write many books when I choose to leave the Neverland but I didn´t never have thinking that children didn´t like my stories when I get older. At first my books has many successes but with the time I could see that my books was unimportant to the children. Then I didn´t have so many money to disposal throughout Wendy always advise me to be with her on the Neverland. My books contain about how my life and who expensive it was for me in Neverland. Before I like to live, but now it is the opposite I am very exhausting I feel that the hospital room is very tremendous. Now I will locate where my band is and go back to Neverland to get my young age back. Maybe it will help the children to read more fairy tales because I will be a young boy with many adventure and it will also help me to advise another before I do anything.
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10. maj 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
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