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Anne Boleyn, Nogle der vil rette en tekst + give deres eget eksempel på hvordan de vil skrive det?
23. maj 2005 af
Malfoy (Slettet)
Hej...
Engelsk er ikke min stærke side så jeg vil hører om der er nogle der gider at se denne lille bid tekst igennem.
Og finde synonymer for nogle ord og skrive teksten på en anden måde men det skal stadig give den samme mening...
Spørg ikkek hvorfor alting har gode grunde....
Jeg håber i vil gøre det her komemr teksten:
Anne Boleyn
Anne Boleyn became the second wife of King Henry the 8. But Henry wanted another wife, so Anne Boleyn became a prisoner in the Tower. In 1536 the executioner received an order to cut of her head on Tower Green. Many people have seen Anne’s ghost since then.
One day in 1972 a nine years old girl was visiting the Tower with her father. She wasn’t a clever girl she didn’t know about Anne Boleyn or Henry the 8. She didn’t find the tower interesting.
The guide had shown them the white Tower and the bloody Tower, when they reached Tower Green he stopped to told them about that som famous prisoners died here.
The executioner cut of their heads with an axe he said. The father of the girl noticed that his small daughter was looking very closely at the green tower.
When the guide said here the executioner’s axe also cut off the head of Anne Boleyn, the little girl said that she had seen the whole execution; she also told them that the executioner had cut of her head with a sword.
And that was right because Anne Boleyn was a queen so they bought a special sword from France for her execution.
Her father asked the little girl how do you know these things then she said that she saw the whole execution…
ps. Når jeg mener finere mener jeg det fordi så at det kan komme til at ligen så meget det engelske sprog som muligt.....
Håber der er nogle der goder at hjælpe...
Engelsk er ikke min stærke side så jeg vil hører om der er nogle der gider at se denne lille bid tekst igennem.
Og finde synonymer for nogle ord og skrive teksten på en anden måde men det skal stadig give den samme mening...
Spørg ikkek hvorfor alting har gode grunde....
Jeg håber i vil gøre det her komemr teksten:
Anne Boleyn
Anne Boleyn became the second wife of King Henry the 8. But Henry wanted another wife, so Anne Boleyn became a prisoner in the Tower. In 1536 the executioner received an order to cut of her head on Tower Green. Many people have seen Anne’s ghost since then.
One day in 1972 a nine years old girl was visiting the Tower with her father. She wasn’t a clever girl she didn’t know about Anne Boleyn or Henry the 8. She didn’t find the tower interesting.
The guide had shown them the white Tower and the bloody Tower, when they reached Tower Green he stopped to told them about that som famous prisoners died here.
The executioner cut of their heads with an axe he said. The father of the girl noticed that his small daughter was looking very closely at the green tower.
When the guide said here the executioner’s axe also cut off the head of Anne Boleyn, the little girl said that she had seen the whole execution; she also told them that the executioner had cut of her head with a sword.
And that was right because Anne Boleyn was a queen so they bought a special sword from France for her execution.
Her father asked the little girl how do you know these things then she said that she saw the whole execution…
ps. Når jeg mener finere mener jeg det fordi så at det kan komme til at ligen så meget det engelske sprog som muligt.....
Håber der er nogle der goder at hjælpe...
Svar #2
23. maj 2005 af migmig (Slettet)
linie 11: stopped to tell
linie 12: them about some famous prisoners who died here.
linie 14: the girl's father
linie 12: them about some famous prisoners who died here.
linie 14: the girl's father
Svar #3
25. maj 2005 af natgizzer (Slettet)
Anne Boleyn
Anne Boleyn was the second wife of King Henry the Eight. But, as Henry wanted another wife, Anne Boleyn was imprisoned prisoner in the Tower.
In 1536, the executioner received an order to cut off Anne Boleyn's head on Tower Green.
Many people claim to have seen Anne’s ghost since then.
One day in 1972, a nine year old girl was visiting the Tower with her father. She was not a enlightened girl, and thus knew nothing about either Anne Boleyn or Henry the Eight. Nor did she find the tower interesting.
The guide had already shown them the White Tower and the Bloody Tower. When they reached Tower Green, he stopped to tell them about the som famous prisoners who died there.
"The executioner cut off their heads with an axe" he said. The father of the girl noticed that his small daughter was looking very closely at the green tower.
When the guide said that it also was here that the executioner’s axe cut off the head of Anne Boleyn, the little girl said that she had seen the whole execution and that the executioner had used a sword instead of an axe.
The little girl actually turned out to be right. As Anne Boleyn was a queen, she had been executed by a special sword imported from France. Her father asked the little girl how she knew these things; a question to which she again replied that she had seen the entire execution.
Håber at det hjalp lidt.
Sig til hvis du ikke forstår rettelserne.
Anne Boleyn was the second wife of King Henry the Eight. But, as Henry wanted another wife, Anne Boleyn was imprisoned prisoner in the Tower.
In 1536, the executioner received an order to cut off Anne Boleyn's head on Tower Green.
Many people claim to have seen Anne’s ghost since then.
One day in 1972, a nine year old girl was visiting the Tower with her father. She was not a enlightened girl, and thus knew nothing about either Anne Boleyn or Henry the Eight. Nor did she find the tower interesting.
The guide had already shown them the White Tower and the Bloody Tower. When they reached Tower Green, he stopped to tell them about the som famous prisoners who died there.
"The executioner cut off their heads with an axe" he said. The father of the girl noticed that his small daughter was looking very closely at the green tower.
When the guide said that it also was here that the executioner’s axe cut off the head of Anne Boleyn, the little girl said that she had seen the whole execution and that the executioner had used a sword instead of an axe.
The little girl actually turned out to be right. As Anne Boleyn was a queen, she had been executed by a special sword imported from France. Her father asked the little girl how she knew these things; a question to which she again replied that she had seen the entire execution.
Håber at det hjalp lidt.
Sig til hvis du ikke forstår rettelserne.
Svar #4
25. maj 2005 af natgizzer (Slettet)
arg, did it again.
* nine-year-old istedet for nine year old
* nine-year-old istedet for nine year old
Svar #5
26. maj 2005 af Malfoy (Slettet)
#4------> Kig på følgende indlæg:
Margeret Pole. Rettelse af Engelsk Tekst samt "finere" sprog....
Maloy,
ps, der har jeg skrevet en lille besked til dig..
Margeret Pole. Rettelse af Engelsk Tekst samt "finere" sprog....
Maloy,
ps, der har jeg skrevet en lille besked til dig..
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